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RosePetal
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0 posted 2002-01-28 12:43 PM


*excuse my weird mood I'm in tonight, kinda silly hehe*

She loves the sounds of rock and roll
Letting the vibe of the music take control
Tatum's not shy, she's quite the flirt
This frienly girl is down to earth
She's everyone's best friend
And they all follow her style trends
In the pool of life she makes a splash
All the boys wonder down her path
No kisses given out on the first date
Anticipation boils but you'll have to wait
It's rare to find her in a bad mood
This cool gal is a fein spicy food
Tatum you see is partly me
On certain days I set her free
Sort of Snake-like, day to day I shed
Tatum's the superwoman I opt to be instead

© Copyright 2002 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2002-01-28 12:57 PM


RosePetal,
Thanks for introducing me. LOL fun write.

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2 posted 2002-01-28 01:37 AM


Neat write here.....creative, and fun to read...thanks for the smile....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Kethry
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3 posted 2002-01-28 07:55 AM


Cool,
Welcome to passions Tatum, I hope you live up to your namesake. Who is also a feisty girl.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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4 posted 2002-01-28 08:15 AM




(showers you with kisses) Ooooooohhhh...no matter when you are feisty or not, you will always be my dream girl that I love so much!!! (kiss on lips) This is sooooooo wonderfully written, sweet love, I will always love you for everything you are! (kisses) You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2002-01-28 03:53 PM


RosePetal,I think everyone should have a fun side.My family tells me I`m silly all the time.






Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-01-28 04:54 PM


Great fun write here Joanna!!
HEY...sexy woman...love the new pic!!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~

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7 posted 2002-01-28 04:57 PM


Kind of your double personality, we all ought to have that I enjoyed this one very much.
rosepetals25
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8 posted 2002-01-28 05:13 PM


Jonna,

    You have to let that gal out more often and have some fun Cool write

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-01-29 01:53 AM


RosePetal - and you have written about Tatum well bringing her to life...

BC

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