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Meadow Meeting
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Meadow Meeting |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Meadow Meeting Perfume of flowers fills the air intoxicating the senses Into eyes of passion they stare without more pretenses Brought here by the message she sent to meet in the moonlight She has prayed for him to consent that his kiss might delight His touch ignites the flames inside causing a blush of heat Yearning hearts begin to collide their hunger to replete They lay on a bed of soft grass under a star filled quilt Partaking what none can surpass while feeding fires they built They’re lost to reality’s world hearing two hearts beating Into live fantasy they’re hurled from this meadow meeting Karen Torbiak 2002 © Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Such a beautiful meeting, sweet friend, may their hearts forever beat together in harmony, just as we all wish you this great happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are sooooooo romantic, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, Oh!! Karen, this is my favorite fantasy (heh heh) yes, yes, a message and then meeting in the moonlight and well, whooppee all the rest too. God, I love this one! Love it! Whew! I liked it, can you tell LOL Kathleen--(Kay) |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Karen...can you give me the directions to this meadow!!!! Love written as only you can dear friend!!! |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
They lay on a bed of soft grass under a star filled quilt Partaking what none can surpass while feeding fires they built Karen - Nicely done. Dave |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This poem is soooo superbly delicious and a fantasy I'd like to have fulfilled... A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love this |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karen, do your ideas ever stop? this is so heavenly, floria Floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karen...Did anyone every tell you you have a vivid imagination??!! LOL....your ideas never run out, thankfully for us here at Passions.....(we need our daily romantic dose)  ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
What a beautiful starlit dream! Thanks, Startime. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice seeing something like this...working on my comp all day...still down...borrowing LouLou's...timeshare... beautiful story Karen...Only you do this that well...ONLY you can... Like it a lot.. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
here's wishing all your fantasies come true.... mine did once.... and still do.... beautiful writing!! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, the continuation to the one I read last night, or was it this morning. I wondered if it would continue…but of course…it had to. There’s nothing like the beauty of two hearts coming together, and you always write it so well. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, I've been to that meadow! What a delightful place. Nice write. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh but you have a way of doing these Nancy, and I loved this one. <font face="monotype corsiva">~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Startime...A wonderful Meadow meeting this is!!!! You always write from your heart, your soul. And, the emotions, the words just seem to burst upon the screen. ***Ivy Rose |
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