»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #18
»
An empty poem
| Open Poetry #18 |
|
An empty poem |
|
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
|
An empty poem They say I'm such, I write too much My head is full, I just can't stop But in this verse, I'll just be terse And leave you null, and let it flop. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Slver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida March24, 2000 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
interesting approach..reminds me of emily dickinson ,impressive |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee Newell, I know the feeling of having a head full of thoughts and just having to get them down on paper. Then I also know the other way, which is how I have been of late, and the thoughts are there but the words won't come. A lot said in a few words my friend! Very well expressed. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
||
Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) Oh Newell, I can relate to this feeling so well; I always have these beautiful dreams and visions I'm just itching to share so much, but sometimes the words don't come out the way I want them too so I just simplify them to be true to how I feel! (sigh) This is a wonderful poem, sweet friend, your words are always a delight to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
The Jackal, thank you for your thoughs. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Nancy. Sometimes I feel like an alphabet storm, LOL... And then, ... -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, sweet Noah. You my loving friend, always write beautiful words. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAHA better to write an empty poem than no poem at all. thanks Newell. this was great. floria Floria |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thanks floria. Enjoyed the laugh! HAHAHA! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, vandana, -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Liked the rhyme scheme to this one. Sometimes saying nothing, can say so much. Nicely done. Dave |
||
|
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Clever is this idea and so the mind of the poet goes....lol...Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Dave. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, ellie. I agree! -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* silly man...don't you know that nothing you write can flop...LOL this poem is wonderful and I want to say something else...just let those words flow..it doesn't matter how much you write as long as you are writing the words that pour out of your heart and you, dear man, do just that. **big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Darling Startime. Thank you for your sweet, sweet words of honey and your big hugs. With my gasoline and your sparks how could I ever stop. Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
don't let it flop..... i hate it when that happens... LOL!!!! this one cracked me up!! |
||
|
Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
doreen peri, flop? (for laughs only, please) LOL... -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
