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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-03 10:40 AM

All Aboard Poetry Lane
~*~

Filling the streets of blue sheets
poetry friends rush to meet
answer one or answer all
it’s a grand ball
dancing on memories
or venting on griefs
reading others is sweet release
lifted high in this place
on wings of others love
there’s peace in the midst of our storms
though so many fill the sheets
of paper and pen
you’ll find a soulfelt friend
so all aboard
take a seat and enjoy the ride

BloomingRose

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (01-03-2002 10:41 AM).]

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2002-01-03 10:44 AM

Debra, you are one of the most beautiful poets around here! All aboard, indeed!

My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-03 07:19 PM

(smiles) Yes, yes, here among this garden of friends, we will always touch each other with our love and the spirit of friendship! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel to us all, we all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-03 08:29 PM

All aboard, what a nice poem. I so enjoyed it. floria

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-01-03 09:34 PM

eading others is sweet release
                                               lifted high in this place
                                               on wings of others love
                                        there’s peace in the midst of our storms
                                            though so many fill the sheets
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answer them all????? I wish ... not any more....there was a time tho...
now its so many poets...so little time...but still we try as the pages fly.
youve penned it well....this place can be sanctuary...poetry gardens eveywhere

this is lovely in its sincerety...Happy New Year poetess Deb!!

"Though my soul may sit in darkness,
It will arise in perfect light.
For I have loved the stars much too fondly ...
To be fearful of the night."

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

5 posted 2002-01-04 10:58 AM

Debra - This is a very nicely penned invitation. Where do I get my ticket?

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2002-01-04 06:18 PM

you know, I love this! I enjoy it so much reading poems on these blue pages! Lots of the great poets are inspiring, including you sweet lady.

RP

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2002-01-04 08:52 PM

Thank you all so much... now I'm off to read some more!
Love and hugs,
me

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

8 posted 2002-01-04 11:01 PM

Hi Debra,

What a delightful poem and you are so right about these wonderful blue, blue pages of Passions, so full of every sort of feeling under the sun, very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

9 posted 2002-01-04 11:17 PM

Hi Debra,

I've used a similar personification, and worked a train or midnight coach express into the poem..lightly though..there's good variety on the site and this piece stands out!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2002-01-04 11:24 PM

BloomingRose - hold that train and let me climb aboard.

BC

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

11 posted 2002-01-05 09:15 AM

Thank you all, my poet friends.
*hugs*
Deb

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