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A Picture Of Perfection
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A Picture Of Perfection |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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Paint for me a picture Let your heart take full command Use the colors in your palette To paint two lovers on the sand Let us act out a love scene Straight out of Romeo & Juliet We'll pretend to be new lovers As if we have only just met Paint for me a heart Containing both of our names As we surrender to one another My heart is yours to tame Paint for me a rainbow Across a sky of sapphire blue And write high up in the heavens Three words saying 'I love you' Paint for me a garden With heavenly fragrance all around To fill up all my senses With every sight and sound Paint for me our future For all eternity our love will shine I'll give to you my heart If you promise you'll always be mine Paint for me perfection For I now have everything you see And that picture of perfection Is standing right in front of me Suetang |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Oh, Sue, this is beautifully worded and so vivid and expressive! Well done! Love, Bonnie |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue, can I have this poem...I think I could have written this...but not as beautifully as you have done... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Sue, this is exquisite! I LOVE IT. so gorgeous...you deserve to have perfection sweet lady.  |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Beautifully written Sue with a fabulous ending. Such a talented painter of words you are. Your friend, Roger |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oooh I like this, something about a painter..... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Sue, no one paints love the way you do, rich in image...pure in its intensity!!!! |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Sue... this is very pretty ... Flows well and makes the reader feel good : ) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you have painted love perfectly....Absolutely stunning, Sue....I love this poem...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Vacuity Junior Member
since 2002-01-22
Posts 12 |
beautimous |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you always paint such gorgeous words of love, may your skies forever be lined with rainbows and may your gardens shine with loves sunshine! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
And, perfection it is Wonderful write here! I love it! Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The title says it all, Sue! And I cannot add to perfection, so I will simply applaud! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And remember once you told me you couldn't write poetry? Someone you know somewhere, absolutely is beaming in pride at your accomplishments. This was simply lovely Sue, and if you get that painting done, ask if the artist has a brother  for me will you? ~* CARPE' DIEM *~ |
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