Open Poetry #18 |
FreeFalling |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
FreeFalling, at a snowflake pace. Past memories, of another place, in time, when life was a mystery, when better days, were yet to be. FreeFalling, through love's residue. The pain still clings, like morning dew, to my heart, and mind. Still, bitter I am not. for I held onto what was truly mine. FreeFalling through an endless sky of clouds that drift so slowly by and teardrops fall like rain, so soft - and then as clouds are borne aloft, lost in one final love's good-bye left floating through an azure sky. |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
so very sad, I could touch it in easy reach, but you know, there is very little difference in falling and flying. Take care, God bless. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is soft, yet filled with love... the past, the memories and the feelings.. Nicely done.. |
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DayDreamer99 Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 72 |
That was very very good it made me feel exactally what you were talking about Keep up the god work Tifferz |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooo sad but beautiful, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your feelings of lost love, but I know deep down soon you will be embraced by loves sweetness again and will feel happiness and sun-shining days forever! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-23-2002 07:20 PM).] |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
My thanks to all for taking the time to stop in. I do appreciate the kind words. ~Sandi |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A little free falling can be good sometimes, just as long as you don't fall too far, take care! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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