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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-01-23 03:09 AM


This Is My Life

I hold not the key
to the heart of my lover
and yet she holds my heart
for I desire no other.
If she should decide
to be my wife
I will hold her
and love her
for the rest
of my life.

January23
2002


© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2002-01-23 03:17 AM


Who needs a key...you have poetry.  Excellent write!
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-01-23 06:04 AM


*s  a love note indeed.

M

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2002-01-23 06:07 AM


Such sweet romantic sentiments James ... she would be a lucky lady indeed, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2002-01-23 10:24 AM


Oh James, how very lucky she is.

Floria
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5 posted 2002-01-23 10:26 AM


enjoyed
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6 posted 2002-01-23 11:02 AM




(sigh) You are sooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, she is such a lucky woman and will always be so happy to share such a loving heart as yours! (big hugggsssss) May loves joy forever fill your life, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2002-01-23 12:22 PM


Lovely James..must be love

             ~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

                                                -Ziggy

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2002-01-23 12:55 PM


James,
Yep it must be love. Enjoyed

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9 posted 2002-01-23 01:05 PM


Throw away the key and break down the doors!! Your words are wonderful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Ariana
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10 posted 2002-01-23 03:31 PM


Oh James - you romantic you.  Very nicely said and I hope all your wishes come true.
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11 posted 2002-01-23 05:22 PM


I agree...who needs a key when you have words
such as these to open a heart...Nice James.

seraphin
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12 posted 2002-01-23 05:26 PM


Very sweet.
Some things work best when kept short and to the point. I like it a lot.

Bill Charles
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13 posted 2002-01-23 09:44 PM


James - sweet words, sweet words they are. I like it a lot...

BC

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14 posted 2002-01-23 10:38 PM


James, enjoyed so much tonight!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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