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Tolling a Bell
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Tolling a Bell |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Tolling a Bell Nymphomania pirouettes In shapely salacious shadows To flare a sigh And rumble the sky While passions parasite demons Machinate a red facade Fire blood within. Beneath the skin Heating punchinello winds To strike causing fires flare To bellow. And mellow. Bending time upon itself Tilting the sands of pour to Incline instead Of decline. Setting the mortar of disorder. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
WOW! A powerful statement Seymour, and an amazing write! This one knocked the wind out of me!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Nymphomania pirouettes In shapely salacious shadows =============================== While passions parasite demons Machinate a red facade Fire blood within. Beneath the skin Heating punchinello winds To strike causing fires flare =============================== Bending time upon itself Tilting the sands of pour to Incline instead Of decline. ================================= yowzerzs...did Randy eat the misteltoe? get into the catnip? No...me thinks he had salsa with his chips and beer  LOLStinky only you could come up with these very cool lines and images ....... "shapely salacious shadows"(now there is the coolest alliteration I'll ever read!!) "Machinate a red facade" "Heating punchinello winds" "Tilting the sands of pour" your poetry bends time and our minds... this firey, cryptic conjurs up so many images very very cool poem Sy-babers(and Randy) *L*  jm"Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Kit and Moth took my replies...so I shall just sit here and say...write on... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit, A WOW from you is like a delicious MEOW. *L* JM, You fly within the garden of my soul. WW R S Sunshine, You just set there and keep shining *L* |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, WOW! I absolutely love the last line. what a fitting finale! Gotta be one of your very best, Sy! BRAVO! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bending time upon itself Tilting the sands of pour to Incline instead Of decline. Wow is right! This is awesome and powerful writing! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is indeed powerful. I used to help my husband years ago, store his mortar shells, lovely job for a woman. For some reason this made me think of that  My perception of truth will somehow never quite be the same..and so I write. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Seymour,I don`t know the right words to say.So I`ll just say GREAT!  Juanita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit, Thank you for the flattering comment. Kathleen, I guess it is explosive. *L* Juanita, LOL, that is the right word. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love it, I love it, your words always impress me as you toll gongs of passions with true emotion and beauty! (big hugggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, your words always emphasize so well! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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