Strolling through the Night

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Open Poetry #18

Strolling through the Night

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-01-22 12:47 PM

Walking
Waiting for green
Crossing the street quickly
Stepping on the curb of shadows
Avoiding the blaring and glaring lights
Going

Going
Almost unseen
By people you’re stealthy
Beneath glowing curtained windows
Casual moves yet staying out of sight
Sneaking

Sneaking
Where have you been?
Moving there so briskly
Is there somebody that follows
As you move silent and intent through night
Walking.

Gloom

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

1 posted 2002-01-22 12:49 PM

hmm.. paints a vivid picture in my head.. very dark and treacherous. Feels very lonely too

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2002-01-22 12:54 PM

Thank you, EagleScorpion,
Then you caught the mood of this exercise,
Glad I was able to paint you a small picture with my words.

Gloom

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