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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2002-01-22 02:43 AM



If Not for Tears

What is this sorrow, but a fallen tear
That washes heartache onto pleasure’s face
Uncovering the sentiments so dear
Hidden in a secret inner place

What is joy, but teardrops in the eye
Cascading over waterfalls of strife
That all may for a passing moment spy
Though laughter’s open window pane of life

What is love, but moments when we weep
For beauty or for pain that’s in our hearts
For ecstasy or sentiments that creep
Into the night when lovers are apart

If not for tears, our hearts would never prime
What’s hidden in the deepest wells of time

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2002 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-01-22 03:01 AM


OhLizzie~

'If not for tears, our hearts would never prime
What’s hidden in the deepest wells of time'


I, too, celebrate my tears when they fall for someone I love or have loved~

This is tenderly touching~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-01-22 08:28 AM




(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is sooooooo beautiful, I for one love to cry and think it is such a gift when one can cry to show their emotions to others and have compassion shared between them all, for we can never prime and be helped by our loved ones if we don't share our tears! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-01-22 08:36 AM


Elizabeth,
Marge pulled the same lines.
If not for tears, our hearts would never prime
What’s hidden in the deepest wells of time
It doesn't get better than that. Love Sy

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2002-01-22 08:42 AM


If not for tears, our hearts would never prime


beautifully written,..I guess we all can draw on these lines..they are felt deeply.
*s
Maureen

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2002-01-23 07:25 PM


this is another treasure from your pen.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

strbbux
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6 posted 2002-01-23 07:45 PM


"If not for tears, our hearts would never prime" I do hate to repeat but we do all love the same line, Elizabeth you never fail. this is beautiful.floria

Rodney Belcher
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7 posted 2002-01-23 08:59 PM


I too echo the other comments and just wanted to give you my 2 cents worth...Rod

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brianbeaudry
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8 posted 2002-01-23 09:23 PM


What is joy, but teardrops in the eye
Cascading over waterfalls of strife

Just to be different...these are my favorite!!! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, a beautiful read!!!

DarkAngelChelle
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9 posted 2002-01-23 09:26 PM


Wonderful!  Tears are a thing of beauty, aren't they?  

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

cruz
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10 posted 2002-01-23 09:30 PM


I can't get enough of this frequency!  I especially liked the following...

"If not for tears, our hearts would never prime"

A job well done.



Startime
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11 posted 2002-01-23 09:39 PM


*sigh* such a beautiful sonnet...neither sad nor happy but tells us the true value of tears....magnificent writing. I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Bill Charles
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12 posted 2002-01-23 10:24 PM


Liz - I never thought about tears this way. Thank you for opening up my eyes. So true is tears of happiness, and tears of sadness. Tears true, but so different...

BC

peppermint35
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13 posted 2002-01-23 10:34 PM


Just lovely, Elizabeth, and, making me shed a few of my own..

Hugz,

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

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