Open Poetry #18 |
If Not For Tears |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
If Not for Tears What is this sorrow, but a fallen tear That washes heartache onto pleasure’s face Uncovering the sentiments so dear Hidden in a secret inner place What is joy, but teardrops in the eye Cascading over waterfalls of strife That all may for a passing moment spy Though laughter’s open window pane of life What is love, but moments when we weep For beauty or for pain that’s in our hearts For ecstasy or sentiments that creep Into the night when lovers are apart If not for tears, our hearts would never prime What’s hidden in the deepest wells of time Elizabeth Santos |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhLizzie~ 'If not for tears, our hearts would never prime What’s hidden in the deepest wells of time' I, too, celebrate my tears when they fall for someone I love or have loved~ This is tenderly touching~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is sooooooo beautiful, I for one love to cry and think it is such a gift when one can cry to show their emotions to others and have compassion shared between them all, for we can never prime and be helped by our loved ones if we don't share our tears! (kiss on cheek) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Marge pulled the same lines. If not for tears, our hearts would never prime What’s hidden in the deepest wells of time It doesn't get better than that. Love Sy |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
If not for tears, our hearts would never prime beautifully written,..I guess we all can draw on these lines..they are felt deeply. *s Maureen |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is another treasure from your pen. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
"If not for tears, our hearts would never prime" I do hate to repeat but we do all love the same line, Elizabeth you never fail. this is beautiful.floria |
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Rodney Belcher Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 227Taylor, Michigan |
I too echo the other comments and just wanted to give you my 2 cents worth...Rod Nothing ever happens unless first a Dream - Rod |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
What is joy, but teardrops in the eye Cascading over waterfalls of strife Just to be different...these are my favorite!!! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem, a beautiful read!!! |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Wonderful! Tears are a thing of beauty, aren't they? ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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cruz Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 282Dallas,Texas USA |
I can't get enough of this frequency! I especially liked the following... "If not for tears, our hearts would never prime" A job well done. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such a beautiful sonnet...neither sad nor happy but tells us the true value of tears....magnificent writing. I love it. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Liz - I never thought about tears this way. Thank you for opening up my eyes. So true is tears of happiness, and tears of sadness. Tears true, but so different... BC |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Just lovely, Elizabeth, and, making me shed a few of my own.. Hugz, Pepper |
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