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Raining Stardust
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Raining Stardust |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Raining Stardust It sparkles in the moonlight flowing gently to the ground When dancing during star flight it scatters magic around Lift your face to the night sky, make a wish and close your eyes Prepare for a Star’s reply that will come as a surprise Made among the stars for you with care given each detail Ready to make it’s debut and help romance to prevail While standing bathed in moonbeam give faith and total trust Can’t you see it’s not a dream for now it’s raining stardust Karen Torbiak 2002 Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Nicely written... enjoyed your poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...BRAVO!!! This is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I hope you are beginning to feel true love, for you deserve true happiness so so much! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Startime as I gaze up there Pulled into your little flare Burning all my misery Thank you for just healing me. Love your celestial delights. -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ You've written your light for sure~ While standing bathed in moonbeam give faith and total trust Can’t you see it’s not a dream for now it’s raining stardust *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
I made a wish when I read this poem that it would never end.  This definitely had a magical feel to it. Nicely done. Dave |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Your poetry is always so uplifting, starry one. Write on!!  |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
You have out-done yourself again dearest friend...the magic of this piece lends its setting an even stronger essence of romance and promise. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...our Star...you are our dream merchant You weave our dreams which each of us have. Your visions create them...your stardust seals them and makes them come true... We love what you do for us..You are certainly a shining Star.. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Karen, your titles pull me in and then I get to enjoy your beautiful poetry..wonderful. floria |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karen~ any topic that rains, is stunning, and this my friend is more then that.....the image is lovely....BIG HUGS.... you are saving these right?? giving them to that special one??Lauren~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-21-2002 11:06 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
While standing bathed in moonbeam give faith and total trust Can’t you see it’s not a dream for now it’s raining stardust I gotta tell you, this truly made me smile. You are really a 'feel good poet'...thanks! |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
 Startime...I really love this poem. It is so much like you...spreading Star Dust over all our hearts and showering us with Star Glitter that anoints our souls. ***Ivy Rose |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How much nicer to rain stardust, than tears. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Karen dear..beautiful images..and im wondering how marge did that ha..  ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you always bring me ~smiles~ thank you M |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
It is also raining with the beauty of your heart through poetry, Lady. I love this! |
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