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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

0 posted 2002-01-21 10:05 PM

Raining Stardust

It sparkles in the moonlight
flowing gently to the ground
When dancing during star flight
it scatters magic around

Lift your face to the night sky,
make a wish and close your eyes
Prepare for a Star’s reply
that will come as a surprise

Made among the stars for you
with care given each detail
Ready to make it’s debut
and help romance to prevail

While standing bathed in moonbeam
give faith and total trust
Can’t you see it’s not a dream
for now it’s raining stardust

Karen Torbiak 2002

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

1 posted 2002-01-21 10:09 PM

Nicely written... enjoyed your poem.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-21 10:10 PM

(smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...BRAVO!!! This is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I hope you are beginning to feel true love, for you deserve true happiness so so much! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtakingly beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-01-21 10:13 PM

Startime as I gaze up there
Pulled into your little flare
Burning all my misery
Thank you for just healing me.

Love your celestial delights.

-Silver Streak

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-01-21 10:13 PM

StarTime~
You've written your light for sure~

While standing bathed in moonbeam
give faith and total trust
Can’t you see it’s not a dream
for now it’s raining stardust

*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

5 posted 2002-01-21 10:28 PM

I made a wish when I read this poem that it would never end.

This definitely had a magical feel to it. Nicely done.

Dave

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

6 posted 2002-01-21 10:41 PM

Your poetry is always so uplifting, starry one. Write on!!

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

7 posted 2002-01-21 10:41 PM

You have out-done yourself again dearest friend...the magic of this piece lends its setting an even stronger essence of romance and promise.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-01-21 10:48 PM

Karen...our Star...you are our dream merchant

You weave our dreams which each of us have.
Your visions create them...your stardust
seals them and makes them come true...

We love what you do for us..You are certainly
a shining Star..

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

9 posted 2002-01-21 10:49 PM

Karen, your titles pull me in and then I get to enjoy your beautiful poetry..wonderful. floria

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

10 posted 2002-01-21 11:06 PM

Karen~

any topic that rains, is stunning, and this my friend is more then that.....the image is lovely....BIG HUGS....

you are saving these right?? giving them to that special one??

Lauren~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-21-2002 11:06 PM).]

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

11 posted 2002-01-22 12:12 PM

While standing bathed in moonbeam
give faith and total trust
Can’t you see it’s not a dream
for now it’s raining stardust

I gotta tell you, this truly made me smile. You are really a 'feel good poet'...thanks!

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

12 posted 2002-01-22 12:22 PM

Startime...I really love this poem.
It is so much like you...spreading Star Dust over all our hearts and showering us with Star Glitter that anoints our souls.

***Ivy Rose

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2002-01-22 08:57 AM

How much nicer to rain stardust, than tears.
Sandra

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

14 posted 2002-01-22 09:35 AM

Lovely Karen dear..beautiful images..and im wondering how marge did that ha..

~Vic

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

15 posted 2002-01-22 10:18 AM

you always bring me ~smiles~ thank you
M

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

16 posted 2002-01-22 03:10 PM

It is also raining with the beauty of your heart through poetry, Lady. I love this!

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