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Will you remember me - sonnet
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Will you remember me - sonnet |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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I've some time at the moment, so I did try another sonnet. Must keep trying. Remember all the things I've ever done And tell along the stories you've been told The stories of my life, which have long gone Cause they have worth for someone, I am sure The life I lived, I did not live in vain Go tell them how I loved my roses pure In early mist, with little drops of rain And when I'm gone, don't grieve too much my dear For I was happy in so many ways So keep the humor that I loved to hear Cause with the humor, also laughter stays Though my life has reached almost september I won't be old, 'til I pass december A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link. [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (01-22-2002 03:37 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Titia, this is a joyful little sonnet... with some reflection of the writer... and a pleasant read...thank you.. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful sonnet, Titia. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi there, thanks for reading. I've a question: What does sound better: "Cause they are worth to someone" or, "Cause they have worth for someone"??? Don't know, struggling with my English. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's a stunning sonnet! Oh, and "cause they have worth to someone" sounds better hon......And we shall never be old because of our............  Kathleen--(Kay) A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (01-21-2002 08:22 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you write such gorgeous sonnets that shine across these pages! (kiss on cheek) Your stories mean so much to us all, and we are all so delighted to share our words with you too! We all love you so much, sweet friend, I like "Cause they are worth to someone!"! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ My friend ... you are remarkable~ Just lovely, lovely~ Your 'struggle' with your English is admirable~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Titia, This is a beautiful sonnet!! Not to worry so much about your English... You are doing just fine! Well done poetess. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Love is the realization of a beautiful dream~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is a very beautiful sonnet, Titia "cause they have worth for someone" sounds much better. Poets never get old, Titia...we become classics  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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