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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-21 03:34 PM

Sing a song that I know,sing along as we go.
For I have these three words of my love, I bestow
I do give my heart pure, this I will and endure
And my warmth, my desire, are for you, I assure.

For the joy in my eyes, for the taste of one kiss.
A soft touch of your face, I do pray not to miss
Let our walk upon sand carry us to the land
as we bask in the light, feeling warm, hand in hand.

Candle bright, starry night, loving sight, all so right.
Left to share purest love, left to give in the light.
Given by destiny, two souls fly, soaring free.
Sharing touch, not to fail, feeling fire of ecstacy.

Touch my soul, share my gift, bells do toll as I lift.
For with you I feel this moment true of pure bliss.
And I wish just to say, that I will forever stay
as true thought lets you know, and my love takes away.

Let your eyes see the sight, let your ears hear the word
Feel the touch of soft sigh, soaring high as a bird
Catch me there within you, keep me close, love me too.
For in me is the wish to be one, one with you.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (01-21-2002 04:20 PM).]

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-21 03:37 PM

Oh Magnus, there is a little bit of everything that is wonderful in this poem. A romantic picture indeed. floria

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2002-01-21 03:40 PM

My but your heart abounds in romance today! This gave me little lonely pangs as I read.
Sometimes nothing will do but to make that "ultimate connection"...lovely, Mag!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-01-21 03:56 PM

Beautiful Barry....much enjoyed these thoughts today....*sigh*
~Hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2002-01-21 04:17 PM

I give a rose when I am at a loss for words and a poem moves me......

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2002-01-21 04:36 PM

I love the rhythm..does sound like a song..nicely done Barry...as always..

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

6 posted 2002-01-21 05:13 PM

I love the romance in you.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-01-21 05:26 PM

Floria, I just thought I would write a poem
which contained back to back triplets...
three syllable groups...found it to be
fairly easy to make them come together...

Thanx...

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2002-01-21 05:32 PM

*sigh* oh gosh, Barry...you should read this one to Lou before you go to bed tonight...it made me think of how you miss her when you are away...like when you went to Hawaii before Christmas....you heart speaks of pure love and romance through your poetry..I love it. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-01-21 05:32 PM

Serenity...I guess I am feeling my oats
today...the old stallion waiting for his
mare to come home from work... Notice
I did not say old mare....I think I need to
keep from putting my hoof in my mouth...

Thanx..

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2002-01-21 05:33 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may this wish always come true for you, sweet friend, for you deserve the greatest and happiest love forever and ever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is sooooo enchanting! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-01-21 05:34 PM

Nancy Lee....thank you...and gosh, just
a single sigh from up north (kidding)...
and how many hugs now?? I lost count..

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2002-01-21 05:35 PM

Kay, thank you for the rose...much enjoy
getting a flower every now and then...Lou
gets them...but I just get the bill...and
more later in the evening...(grin)

china doll
Junior Member

since 2002-01-20

Posts 22

13 posted 2002-01-21 05:35 PM

This is the most beautiful poem I have ever read...it sounds like a song, do you sing it at all? Anyways, just to let you know, I would melt if a man wrote a poem like this to me...that special girl is lucky! Hope to hear more...
sincerely Joanna

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

14 posted 2002-01-21 05:36 PM

Vic....yes, I was trying to make it sing
as I wrote it...not too bad..but could be
better flow in the song...Thanx..

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

15 posted 2002-01-21 05:37 PM

For the joy in my eyes, for the taste of one kiss.
A soft touch of your face...

all these I do miss...lovely Barry *s
as always are your words

M

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2002-01-21 05:38 PM

Walker...thanx much...and I do so much enjoy
writing it...I guess you have noted that
already...thanx again...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2002-01-21 05:40 PM

Karen...YEP...but I think I am gonna clear
out the old vocal cords and see if I can
sing this one to her...She will prob. look
at me and wonder if I have been into some
elixer today or maybe taken a couple of
blue pills (grin)....Thanx...enjoy your
thoughts..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2002-01-21 07:37 PM

China Doll...thank you...YES, I sing this.
And a pleasure seeing you here at PiP...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2002-01-21 07:38 PM

'M'...thank you...I try to make them that
way...make them enjoyable to others as they
are for me to write..

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

20 posted 2002-01-21 08:11 PM

wow, really need this today. thank you Barry for the warm heart you share with us.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

21 posted 2002-01-21 08:16 PM

AWC...HUGS...seems that is what you need
today...Glad you got a little softness from
this poem and made your day a little lighter.

That makes this man feel good about his
poetry...

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

22 posted 2002-01-21 09:22 PM

A beautifully written and romantic poem, Barry.
I enjoyed it very much.

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

23 posted 2002-01-21 09:25 PM

Lyra, Madame C...you are a dear...thanks..
and do enjoy your little animations...

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