Open Poetry #18 |
Our Ship Of Love |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
As the sun begins to set Like a jewel in the crown We'll admire nature's beauty As the sun sinks slowly down The seabirds fly above us Gliding effortlessly in place How we marvel at their beauty So much majesty and grace Our ship of love sets sail Underneath the golden sky How tranquil is this setting As we begin to drift on by We'll snuggle up together Close together by the mast As we move closer to the sunset Our dreams will soon be cast So much love there is to be made In this warming amber glow As our ship moves across still waters Where it takes us - heaven knows Suetang |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This made me think of how wonderful a cruise would be... and I plan one someday. Enjoyed this, Sue Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
Simply warm and lovely. I enjoyed the view, thanks! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed this Suetang...James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Romantic and lovely, Sue. Enjoyed as always. All writing comes |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may you ship of love forever rock softly on waters of eternity and take you to heavenly paradise! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Sue..this vision is absolutely stunning. It is romance at its very best. I love it...I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I must agree...this is a beautifully flowing and romantic poem...As I said...I do enjoy romance at sea or on seashore...And you have done this well...Excellent writing Sue.. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
When in love who cares ..its not where you are its who you are with ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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