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Would you Like To Dance?
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Would you Like To Dance? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Would you like to dance upon these keys? where so many poems are hiding fingertips maneuver over stair step letters and magically my fingers are gliding I can tap dance across a keyboard and make it sing like a tea pot in the morn or drink coffee with a nursery rhyme make it warble, like a French horn Im not saying im Ginger Rodgers and im certainly not Fred Astaire but I bet they couldn’t write poetry Because they say, they didn’t have an affair Would you like to dance upon these keys? Im not Ginger, but can always bleach my red hair You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. -Ziggy [This message has been edited by Victoria (01-21-2002 06:42 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Victoria This was wonderfully written and very much enjoyed...fabulous! Take care......Sue Suetang |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cheers to this fun and inspiring poem. And don't dye your hair LOL Sandra |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Please, Vic! May I have the very next dance You choose the gait and I will gladly wait To glide along the keyboard of romance Sweet poetry we'll write, all day and night. Good one! Thanks! Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
NO! Never go blonde I did once and it wasn't me!This reminded me of a piano but I know that's not what it is about! But you know I think poetry and song are so closely intertwined and I like the way you brought that out in this one, Victoria. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
LOL! I liked this, and you're right, don't lament about what you don't have, but take pride in your talent! Thanks for the invitation to dance!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sue..thank you im glad you enjoyed..thanks for peeking in today Sandra..thanks hon.. not a chance in bleaching my hair ha..  newell..im sure you are a smooth dancer  kathleen..thank you kathleen dear..glad you enjoyed..yes i have been a blonde too but a long time ago.. vandana mac attack You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the beautiful words you write! (kiss on cheek) May you always sing with all your heart and strum the chords of your destiny! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This poem is absolutely beautiful, Victoria...I know that you usually do free verse, so it is really refreshing to see a rhyming poem of yours...a really excellent one, at that!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Noah and Madame..thank you both so much for your very sweet comments..  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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