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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
There are the memories my mind does pursue of the touch, and remembrance of you Regardless of time, or distance away I still hear the words you used to say Like pulling a book with pages of yellow old with time, but the words still mellow Or is because of the time that is past of when we were young, and love would last Your fault, my fault, no fault at all the paths did split, and all did fall But in my mind, you linger still and in my heart, you always will Or was it determined that the time wasn’t right and the future would bring once more in sight Bringing the chance once more again to make us more, than just good friends For in the twilight of the night you still come unbidden into my light For a part of me, you will always be down into time, into eternity |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Loved this one, Logan. I don't think we ever truly let go of love, even when its time has passed. Much wisdom here. Smile. All writing comes |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan---One thing is for sure, love is always a good subject for poetic pondering...and I always enjoy yours. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, yep, yep...if we ever forget we loose something beautiful, no matter the end...just like life, when its gone and you know it no longer...you've lost something beautiful; but love we can remember as long as we live...so choose to never forget. Good write my friend. jwesley |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Logan, lot of love floating around passions pages tonight...this beautiful piece being one of them. Love this, I do, I do. ~Hugs and a soft smile, Nancy~ ~* A dream is a wish your heart makes... *~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, maybe the time wasn't right, but your heart is destined to find the most beautiful eternal love at the right time to forever fill you with joy! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are sooooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Amazing that what could have been, might still be, if and when... I hope someday, you have that chance... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Like pulling a book with pages of yellow old with time, but the words still mellow Or is because of the time that is past of when we were young, and love would last ======================================= Or was it determined that the time wasn’t right and the future would bring once more in sight Bringing the chance once more again to make us more, than just good friends For in the twilight of the night you still come unbidden into my light For a part of me, you will always be down into time, into eternity ===================================== whats this I hear on the whispering winds...whats this I see written in the rising smoke... What once was ... will be again If meant to be ... time will turn ... in sway of begin. Logan...your words are the wisdom sticks on the fire.  "Though my soul may sit in darkness, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Woulda, shoulda, coulda. I think eternity is a loooooooooooong time. Hang in there  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Logan, this makes me think of someone very special in my heart.....memories that will never fade....I love this. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, what is truly sad is when you even lose the friendship... 'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestKeeper~ Some memories are etched forever~ This reminds me of one of them that lays within my heart~ 'For in the twilight of the night you still come unbidden into my light For a part of me, you will always be down into time, into eternity' For that's the way it is ... and shall always be~ Love to you, sweet guardian~ *Hugs* ~*LittleGoose*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I love this, Logan! *S* Your fault, my fault, no fault at all the paths did split, and all did fall But in my mind, you linger still and in my heart, you always will I add a whispered "Amen"... *S* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
One could say this is deceptively beautiful, but then, one would have no heart, for in order to feel this piece, one needs to believe... and my best friend is Tinkerbell... |
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