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Two Mornings
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Two Mornings |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Breezy, Queasy Day the birds fly out perhaps a score in a spring-sky ballet then upon the wind to save their skins return to branch and twig a while more fifty or more extend their gran’ plie` up they rise a south reprise then scamper home again the breezes blow limbs to and fro make clinging tough, you know escaping quaking with branches shaking seems the bent they try but wind does howl and whispers growl binding them tree nigh ©January 19, 2002 New Morning gently the morning slips in softly caresses my outer layer massages my heart with tenderness of life it’s as if a whisper tells me I’m right right with my time right with my place the anxiousness of former days melts into the past somewhere behind the looking glass faint of reflection lost imperfection beyond my detection erased to the grave making this hour clean new fresh to begin again as the creature He called me to be ©January 20, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (01-20-2002 12:52 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it!!! (smiles) May we all rise to each morning and feel His light and love shine upon us and embrace the day with wings of the heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
the birds fly out perhaps a score in a spring-sky ballet lovely images here Virginia..enjoyed hugs ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Now these are two mornings that I would love to wake up to. New beginnings and new awakenings...BRAVO!!!Very well done. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS, A very pleasant read and I flew with the birds. *L* |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very nice VAS I am such a bird lover, and this was wonderful. The second piece also lovely,I liked the last verse in that one. floria |
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