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An Archaic Musing
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An Archaic Musing |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
As oft' t'would seem that I digress, 'tis trenchant penchant I confess, and thus I hope n'er goes away ability with words to play. As marbles scattered to and fro', me musings o'er the page do flow, 'fore long, so I am told, ergo their end is nigh, what fatal blow! Aghast, my thoughts recoil, pell-mell, 'twas oft' among them I would dwell, e'en now in death they cast their spell, alas, poor words, I knew them well. With sorrowed hand upon the pen, might I yet call them forth again? |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the wonderful words you write, you write the beauty of the Muse in the wonderful classic form here gorgeously! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you always spill the marbles in your heart and create beautiful visions always like you always do! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* BRAVO!!!!This wonderful sonnet goes right into my library...it isn't just musing it is a masterpiece and I love it. **big hugs**  I am so glad I read this poem. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Dr. Moose, I do love your style. wonderful. floria |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"As marbles scattered to and fro', me musings o'er the page do flow," I'd like to see these flowing marbles more often, dear Dr. Moose. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ Delightful little sonnet~ If you 'lost your marbles' ... I'd love to find them~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
*s love the write and love Marge's response to you.. M |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Noah, Thank you, your words are too kind. Doc Startime, One of my classmates in the workshop inspired this little piece when he pointed out that I tend use archiac words to preserve meter and flow.I'm glad you enjoyed it. Doc floria, Thank you . If you believe in muses, I think mine must be rather whimsical. Doc Midnitesun, Thanks, the only problem with marbles is that some of them are klinkers. Doc Marge, my dear, now that could be a full time job( I don't even know how many I had to begin with!)Thanks, Doc nakd, Glad you liked, this was another fun write. Doc |
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