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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-01-20 12:14 PM



Clear Joy


sunlight danced
upon a window pane
clear delighted steps
it did contain
joy in the glass
drew me nearer
silver melted to its back
it became a mirror
a mirror can show
a magical effect
happiness shown
in full reflect

"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-20 12:17 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet Helen, I love it! (kiss on cheek) You sound so happy in your words, it makes me so happy to see the smile in your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-01-20 12:45 PM


Helen, this is truly magical! In it's quiet serenity, true joy and happiness comes to the person who is at peace with himself. And only one who's so calm, can observe the beauty of nature's work...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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3 posted 2002-01-20 12:47 PM


BRAVO!!!Your joy is not only reflected in your mirror but in your words as well. This poem is beautiful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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4 posted 2002-01-20 12:51 PM


It's all there looking back in our reflection.  I like what you wrote
and the way you see yourself.

Your title said it all!!


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5 posted 2002-01-20 12:55 PM


Slick,
To me it read like a twisted delight. Enjoyed

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2002-01-20 01:18 PM


helen - beautiful, as only you do. Nice to see happiness entering you...

BC

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7 posted 2002-01-20 02:21 PM


I can only agree with everyone else...lots
of happiness and good feelings within this
poem Helen,  thank you...

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8 posted 2002-01-22 01:50 PM


h
Yes!
I can see you dancing.
Delightful!!!
e

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