Open Poetry #18 |
Clear Joy |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Clear Joy sunlight danced upon a window pane clear delighted steps it did contain joy in the glass drew me nearer silver melted to its back it became a mirror a mirror can show a magical effect happiness shown in full reflect "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet Helen, I love it! (kiss on cheek) You sound so happy in your words, it makes me so happy to see the smile in your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Helen, this is truly magical! In it's quiet serenity, true joy and happiness comes to the person who is at peace with himself. And only one who's so calm, can observe the beauty of nature's work... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!Your joy is not only reflected in your mirror but in your words as well. This poem is beautiful. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's all there looking back in our reflection. I like what you wrote and the way you see yourself. Your title said it all!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Slick, To me it read like a twisted delight. Enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - beautiful, as only you do. Nice to see happiness entering you... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I can only agree with everyone else...lots of happiness and good feelings within this poem Helen, thank you... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
h Yes! I can see you dancing. Delightful!!! e |
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