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True thoughts I give, my love I leave...
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True thoughts I give, my love I leave... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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True love I give, true thoughts I weave. Of visions pure, of love I leave. The mountain high, the star filled sky. A love of one, a life to touch. A woman alive, a man in love The radiant force, from lights of love. A guiding light, a warm soft glow. This love I give, the heart I know. Within the night, of softest breeze. The starry night, the hug I leave. Two hearts as one, the moon above. Two shadows meld, born of deep love. I leave you now, my heart...a kiss. I say to you, this soul does miss. I long for you, I wish to wait. My love is true...shall not abate. [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-20-2002 10:35 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy I think this is utterly utterly spectacular. The flow the construction the rhythm all combine to make this a truly outstandingly fabulous poem. Rarely is writing this good, certainly this far exceeds my expectations and my expectations for you are always high. YOU are a very good writer and this proves it. Absolutely excellent work   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 [This message has been edited by Marsha (01-20-2002 10:40 AM).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
A woman alive, a man in love The radiant force, from lights of love. Love is a force we have all experienced..a lovely force..enjoyed Barry..  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, yes, your love will always shine and you will forever make your love happy with the sincerity and faithfulness you offer, a love so rare and true! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is another gem of heavenly love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This flowed. I especially like the touch of internal rhyme which I rarely read. Very nice, Barry. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Wow this is so beautiful Magnus "A woman alive, a man in love The radiant force, from lights of love." I love your words. so expressive. floria |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, I love this one as it has great rhythm and beautiful rhyme. Of course I love them all!!  But....there is something about this one.... ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* romance flows from your pen perfectly, Magnus...another poem to make the heart sigh. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ 'I leave you now, my heart...a kiss.' You 'had to know' I'd find this one spellbinding~ I did ... *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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emily Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142USA |
sounds like pure feeling from your heart to hers. Emily |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Magnus~ very tender and romantic....how nice to see love spoken about... Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day and I'm thirsty any way so bring on the rain [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-22-2002 04:42 PM).] |
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