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Gentle Acquiescence
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Gentle Acquiescence |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Aqueous twilight Flows soft into caverns Of steaming rage Capricious passion And avarice of love Washed away By puffs of darkness Billowing through Sultry night And in gentle acquiescence I yield to you ‘Neath velvet sky Feeling your skin Pressed tight Against the coolness of mine Devotion now crystalline As together We combine into one. *Krista Knutson* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When you come home to post, you really come home... this is beautiful, just like you...well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Krista! Nice to see you here once more! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your romantic heart shines in this piece with devotion and happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may loves joy forever sing in your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krista, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Alwye....Gorgeous poem!!!!! Such lovely poetics here. Speaks to the heart and soul. ***Ivy Rose |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Boy I missed your work, this was a jewel! Welcome back! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Thank you all for the beautiful and thoughtful words, I truly appreciate it.  Love to you all. *Krista Knutson* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ 'And in gentle acquiescence I yield to you ‘Neath velvet sky' What a lovely thought ...  Love that new photo too~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Quite the poem, sweetheart! Such beauty and simple passion. Such a tremendous scene you paint with so few words. Enjoyed this piece greatly "A hard, cold wisom is required for goodness to accomplish good. Goodness without wisdom always accomplishes evil" - Robert Heinlein |
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