Open Poetry #18 |
Angels' Breath ......#2000 |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
It seemed appropriate that I dedicate this one to my angel. Thank you for being all that you are! Angels' Breath How do I tell you What you are to me You are the moon and stars You are the air I breathe You are the winters wind Whispered in the trees You are the flaxen sands And the frozen crystal seas You are the angels' breath Laid upon my soul You gave to me my life When I'm with you I'm whole You are this and more To all it's plain to see And still this love it grows Even though it cannot be! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Hold onto that angel, Eddie!!!! They don't come around often you know! I am/Kathleen/ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I was smiling with happiness until the very end then my heart broke for you. This is a stunning poem from the heart. I love it. AND CONGRADULATIONS ON YOUR 200Oth POST..THE PERFECT CHOICE. **big hugs** HAPPY NEW YEAR, DEAR MAN. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (12-31-2001 11:51 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Post for your 2000th!! Congratulations and a Happy New Year! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful gift, to take from the old, to bring into the new... happy 2002 to the both of you! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Kathleen ~ Oh! I know my friend, I know all too well, thank you, take care! Karen ~ Keep smiling!, I rejoice in simply having known her. Thank you my friend. Nancy ~ Thank you, I look forward to the New Year! Sunshine ~ Friendship is always a beautiful gift. I very much like your thought of taking from the old to bring to the new. I thank you! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
Such beautifully written elegant words, and declaration of love. mutington/joyce |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Congrats to you on 2000 posts!! This poem is so very beautiful, Im going to put it in my library! I agree with IrishRose, hold onto that ANGEL. Happy New Year RP |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are sooooooooo romantic! (big hugggssssss) May the angel of your heart forever shine with the joy of pure love! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eddie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
another love eternal poem, and it's sooo good. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetFriend~ You gather phrases so softly in the spread of angelic winging~ Beautifully written from the heart~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I can feel the love in your heart...they say never say never, some wishes do come true...nicely done Eddie ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is such a beautiful tribute to your angel EagleOne. Tender and romantic sentiments to warm the heart. Congratulations on 2,000! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
May you forever soar my sweet friend, your words always touch deeply and this beautiful display of heart and soul is no exception. A touching write and a yet another reason why you are indeed a most special poet...and so much more. Congratulations on 2000...here's to many many more sweet one~ Love and hugs~ |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Straight from the heart, Ed, and beautifully written! Congrats on your 2000. <----I would have raised a glass in toast to you, but we didn't have a smily like that so here's a smoke for you instead. lol Anyways congratulations once again! God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, angels may be hard to hold but they are worth the effort. A beautiful peice for you 2000th. Congrats!! Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So beautiful and romantic, great 2000 post. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
EagleOne - congratulations on the 2000th. A most heart felt poem... BC |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
You are the angels' breath Laid upon my soul You gave to me my life When I'm with you I'm whole ======================================= what a lucky angel she is... much enjoyed.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
A beautiful post for your 2,000 Eddie. Congratulations on the milestone. What a lovely angel she must be, and very proud to have such wonderful poetry written about her. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
EagleOne--This is such a touching piece of heart art..very well done. Congratulations on that 2000 |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eddie, this is so very beautiful. Your angel is lucky. Hope this will be a special year for you and yours, ME |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Exquisite write, Eddie!! Wonderfully done and from the heart. You know how I love that. Congratulations on your 2000th!!! All writing comes |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Joyce ~ Thank you, I appreciate you stopping by. RosePetal ~ Glad you enjoyed this one, thank you! Noah ~ She shines, thank you! ecrivan ~ yeah, it’s that kind of love, thanks. Marge ~ There is much inspiration amongst the angels, thank you, take care! Victoria ~ Well some love never dies; I’ll wait and see about the wishes, thanks. Kit ~ Thank you Kit, she certainly keeps my heart warm, thanks . Butterfly ~ Well they say when you’re in love that anything is possible. There is little else I can say except thank you my dear friend. Love and hugs to you, take care! Elizabeth ~ Straight from the heart is the only way I know, thank you. Dee ~ Yes, indeed they are my friend, thank you. Take care! Walker ~ Thank you for stopping by. Bill ~ Thank you, yes, always from the heart. g ~ Oh I think I’m the lucky one my friend, just to have known her. Thank you, take care! Tracey ~ Well I’ve surprised myself, I never expected to post anything like 2000. Yes, she is indeed lovely, thank you. Martie ~ “ heart art” I like that, thank you. M E ~ Well she may well say that we both know I was the lucky one , thank you and take care! LW ~ It has been to long my friend, hope you are well. Thanks for stopping by, much appreciated, take care! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How do I tell you What you are to me You are the moon and stars You are the air I breathe You are the winters wind Whispered in the trees You are the flaxen sands And the frozen crystal seas ====================================== Well lookie what I found you will already know I love this and the dedication ... and I wont even make any fate and destiny comments sorry I took so long to get here Eddie...major comp failure on New Years eve ..great timing huh? LOL So congrats on 2000 my down under POET SIR.. and Happy New Year to you as well. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Love is such a miracle. And you showed that well here. Congrats on #2000, too. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
A beautiful heartwarming poem. floria |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Janet ~ Ya never know what you’ll find until you go looking! and you know that any comments you make are welcomed, thanks, and take care! Sandra ~ Yes it is , thank you! Strbbux ~ I appreciate your stopping by, thanks! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are marvelous you know that? Congrats on 2000...and there are other angels...just waiting |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eddie Congratulations on your 2000th post, what a wonderful milestone and what a beautiful poem you have given us. We all need special angels and this was written from a beautiful heart. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
What a fabulous poem!!!! And, oh, how lucky the woman you wrote it for. ***Ivy Rose |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Paula ~ I guess that’s the nice thing about angels, they are always out there, thanks. Sue ~ Yes, we do need our angels. Thank you, take care! Ivy Rose ~ Thank you, glad you enjoyed! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi EagleOne, I loved this even though the ending was a surprise and very much enjoyed, congrats on 2000, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eddie, Congratulations on the 2000, such a lovely write to get me through the night. The end was unexpected so it's been resurrected. Lynne Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well I've come in a little late but still wanted to congratulate you on your 2000th! nice tribute, lucky angel. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Cerenity ~ Life can be full those little surprises, glad you enjoyed, thank you. Kethry ~ Thank you friend, glad to help you through the night, take care! passing shadows ~ You’re welcome anytime, thank you. Apologies for my late response, my computer finally threw in the towel so I can only grab the odd moment at work now. It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is a wonderful piece of writing! Perfect for your 2000th post. Happy new year to you both! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
EagleOne, Awwwwwwwww..... this just made my heart melt.. so sweet Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Gentle Spirit ~ I thank you, and wish for you a happy new year as well. rosepetals25 ~ I made your heart melt, wow! I’ve never done that before, not that I know of anyway. Thanks It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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