Open Poetry #18 |
Feel The Warmth...Feel The Glow Within |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
The darkness once felt...whisked away. Taken from my own heart, departing. The light of a single glow now within. The warmth of a ray, shining on me. Can this light forever shine bright? Can two hearts win over the darkness? Will you guide me, love me, as I do? Will the strength felt grow stronger? Listen to the whispers in night trees. Look into the shadows of my heart. Lift my soul into the heights of love. Give me all your words shown true. I have loved you since before birth. My conception birthed my life's quest. Birth gave me your eyes, your love. Death shall let us live in eternal joy. Let my heart forever feel the warmth of the rays of love which flow over. Let my joy be overwhelming, long. For...this man’s soul, body and mind... Are yours... [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-19-2002 12:56 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Magnus - nice writing, very warm as you do. I enjoy reading these... BC |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Magnus as usual simply wonderful.You do write great romance poetry, and now you have got me trying it..a novice I am.. floria |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) If you always believe in your heart and continue to love the loving way you always have, you are destined to forever hold eternal love close to your heart in soul, spirit, body, and mind, forever! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your words are always so wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Magnus...Such GRACE and BEAUTY in this poem of love. Your words dance across the heart. ***Ivy Rose |
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painly- Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 10 |
ya dude very copesthetic, made me feel not so segragated as a mind. thanks painly |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very well done.... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well there you go....making me smile.... |
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