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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Searching at the airport Hari Krishna I became Shaved my head to the bone It never grew back the same Journeyed to the mountains found Dali Lama there He smiled as he asked me What happened to all your hair? Buddha beckoned me next thinking his wisdom is what I need so I wore the orange robes and increased my nightly feed The Baptists wanted to drown me the Catholics wanted my soul the Reformists took away my dance said it would make me whole I tried to be an Amish chick without the electricity when I wanted to surf the net they said it was an impossibility! So where do I find that inner peace man has sought throughout all time perhaps I’ll just look right here in my God-given verse and rhyme (This is all in good humor, I hope no one of any religion is offended by this as there is no offense meant!) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Enjoyed the poem and don't believe anyone would take offense. Humor is a gift from God and you definitly were blessed. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (giggles) You always write the most funniest poems, sweet friend, I too don't believe this would offend anyone's religion, I think it's in good taste! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
yes.. our own work is always there to keep us company when we're REALLY down.. hehe |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
LOL Sharon..very fun poem. Sandra |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHA this is really nice Poet, it would be a terrible thing if we couldn't take a good laugh now and then. floria |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
No worries, PdV... God has a sense of humor...  |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
I like you, find that inner peace and calm in poetry...both reading and writing!!!I loved this poem!!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This was a unique one ha..and i enjoyed it Ms. Devine. ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
I'm catholic, and it's true! We want YOUR SOUL!!!!..lol. This is an excellent read, I've been here..searching. I've found what I was looking for and hope you have/will too! Love, Bonnie |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Very cute PdV, very cute. Though your last lines are absolutely true, inner peace is found within ourselves. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
LMAO! How very true, look within yourself, your talent, and your favorite poetry website for sanctuary. Great post! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very nice as well as funny-- but with a thoughtful close There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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