Open Poetry #18 |
Go Fly a Kite |
Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Go Fly a Kite By Larry Chadwick I didn’t understand it, Made no sense to me. The sun wasn’t shining, It was still as it could be. The timing didn’t match, I was sure it wasn’t right, When my mother said to me, Why don’t you go fly a kite. January 18, 2002 |
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HEG Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 42 |
Been there!! :-) Cute poem. Harry |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Harry, Hey...Welcome to Passions. Hope you love it here as much as I have. Thanks. I was pretty sure I wasn't the Lone Ranger here! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
really really cute, Larry!copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Madame C, I love those responses from the Queen of cute! Thanks. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The best part is, it's still an option. Nice one Larry C. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
BluesSerenade, Ain't that the truth! Thanks. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - this is sweet. I remember my mom saying this to me, and I didn't have a kite! BC |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) Ooohhhhh...this is sooooo cute, sweet friend, yep, it was just the time was wrong! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your love and laughter always delights us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAHA I haven't heard that in a long long time. great poem. floria |
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CondorSey Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 28Dam-Nation |
Short, to the point and conjuring of youthful memories. Also not the usual style or topic. I like it. Let's put the FUN back into Dysfunctional. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
~LOL~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, Now that you mention it, I didn't have a kite either. Go figure. Noah, At least that is a possible explanation. floria, I knew I wasn't the only one! LOL CondorSey, Welcome to Passions. Hope you like this place as much as me. Thanks for your comments. Zinsser, Never met you. But glad you stopped by. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Larry darling boy, utterly utterly delicious, and very cute, rather like you dear boy. As always you've written something that has me smiling and giggling again. Come to think of it my mama told me the same thing, often. I did have a kite it was a beautiful thing in red and yellow, with the longest tail. It used to soar and fly beautifully. One of my sisters cut the tail off one day because I wouldn't let her fly it. I patched it up but it was never the same, a bit like life really. Wonderful writing as always. I love it love it love it Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HAHAHAHAHA. I remember hearing that one more than once. But she never would buy me a kite! I had to make my own, and they never got far off the ground. Moms are mean. |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
People ask me to do that all the time ..... go figure!? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Mushy, See older is wiser, at least you seem wiser! Thank you very much. My kites weren't memorable like yours. Kacy, I've done that. Once we made one eight feet tall and got it to fly! LOL Canuckster, Yeah, what's with that?! LOL [This message has been edited by Larry C (01-20-2002 12:24 AM).] |
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