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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2002-01-18 11:09 PM

“ONLY YOUR TOUCH”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
My mind can only assume, and ponder,
what you would be like, in moonlight…
I’m sure romantic, warm, and soft,
perhaps after dinner, by candlelight…

First I’d stroll with you on the beach,
hold your hand tight, as we walked…
Feeling your heartbeat from tender fingers,
interlocked with mine, while we talked…

I’d share with you all my thoughts,
especially your beauty, seen with my eyes…
And the way my fragile heart beats,
with you it just wants to harmonize…

I would hold you, a tender embrace,
then lie together, under a moonbeam…
Only your touch to know each other,
I would know then, this isn’t a dream…
~~~~

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-01-18 11:15 PM

Oh Bill...this is wonderfully romantic!

Your writing is becoming more and more intense and very visual...must be all those walks by the water. Excellent write here!
Loved it very much indeed.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-01-18 11:22 PM

BC..beautiful words....such a mystery of
love on the beach under moonlight...you
paint a perfect picture...

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-01-18 11:38 PM

Bill darling boy this is outstanding writing the emotions run so free in this. The flow that is absolutely perfect writing doesn’t get much better than this

Truly one of your utter best, it is absolutely excellent writing, the form is divine and the style just screams class. This is a superb piece of writing, don’t ever stop darling boy because where would we be without beauty?

Absolutely Fabulous

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-01-18 11:56 PM

(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your loving heart shines in this gorgeous poem! (sigh) May your love always embrace you in the moonlight and may you forever shine together with true happiness! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shin eupon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

P.S: I would be delighted to write a hilarious duet with you! Let me know any ideas you have! YAY!!!

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2002-01-18 11:59 PM

Very nicely done, Bill

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2002-01-19 11:05 AM

*sigh* now this is the perfect way to start to get to know someone. You have given this beautiful vision with such gentle tenderness that it forms perfectly in my mind...I see you sitting on a beach, at night, your back against a log and your arms holding her as you share your heart and memories....*sigh* beautiful. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2002-01-19 11:10 AM

Beautiful....the stroll along the beach....I love that image....you write of passion with gentle in mind....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-19-2002 11:10 AM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

8 posted 2002-01-19 01:00 PM

Very romantic Bill.. Moonlight and all. wonderful, floria

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2002-01-19 01:21 PM

Bill, Oh, I love it when a man still takes you by the hand when you walk together. I really like this poem. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

10 posted 2002-01-19 01:44 PM

Bill...This is wonderful and romantic. I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE. You are very strong in expressing your deep emotions. Thanks for sharing this precious poem. ***Ivy Rose

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

11 posted 2002-01-19 02:16 PM

~sigh...melting..so well you see into the beauty of a moment. Splendid verse dear poet.

Sincerely,
Regina

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