Open Poetry #18 |
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Dream About Sunshine |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
It is very early morning. As I sit beside the window, I hear the song: Good morning, Mr. Sunshine. You’ve brightened up my day. Come sit beside me … I walk into the kitchen And find a box of Sunshine On the counter. The box is leaking, And Sunshine spills Across the counter and the floor. I try to skoop it up. The sunshine feels clean and fine, Like prestine ocean beach sand, Soft, and light, and fluffy, Like falling snow caught in my hand. I rummage through the cabinets Looking for something I can keep it in. I find a large empty coffee can, a pot. I pour and skoop The sunshine up As best I can into the pot. Then I find a plastic jar Of what? … liquid Sunshine. I decide to pour this also in the pot, and all the Sunshine suddenly dissolves into bubbles of Light which, having been invoked and called forth, swell and swell, filling the kitchen and the houseand me with Light, Light that could not be contained Or be denied. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Jaime, you must know that I love this, but only because you painted such vivid pictures...well, that, and because I just really LIKE it! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (giggles) This is sooooooo beautiful and cute, sweet friend, what a beautiful spring cleaning with your words! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your visions and love you share is always sunshine to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaime, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, Sunshine was smiling all over your counter today. "and all the Sunshine suddenly dissolves into bubbles of Light which, having been invoked and called forth, swell and swell, filling the kitchen and the house and me with Light, Light that could not be contained Or be denied." That is so beautiful. And now, I'm singing again. |
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HEG Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 42 |
A very enjoyable read! It has a very smooth flow. Harry |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Light that could not be contained/or be denied..." This is great, Jaime... You have a wonderful way of seeing with your heart...Thank you for your great insights.. ![]() |
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since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!!This is magically beautiful...it brought sunshine into my heart today. Wonderful, Jaime....I love it. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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