Open Poetry #18 |
Neonpoem |
craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
Throw away your mascara, mousse and underwear. Wear these lines for a week, just one week, not a long time. Let the words mold your face, drape your shoulders, delicate breasts. Let the lyric infuse your dreams, scent your pillows press your thighs with invisible weight. At the end of the week if these Emperor’s clothes are your neon poem, call me. I’ll be here on hold, won’t have eaten, but won’t rewrite. You are new ink that will not dry. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Love the last two lines! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Craig~Enjoyed the entire piece. Great ending...thoroughly enjoyable read! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes...poetry is always the mascara of thought, the pearls of beauty, the makeup of originality, I LOVE IT!!! I too love the whole piece and the last two lines very much, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very beautifully written, Craig. I especially loved these lines Let the words mold your face, drape your shoulders, delicate breasts. Let the lyric infuse your dreams, scent your pillows press your thighs with invisible weight. Great job on this one. copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
thanks for all the kind words of encouragement. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
craig, I love this, the last two lines are fantastic, I went to your site and I love your work, floria |
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