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Her Heart Is Like A Tender Rose
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Her Heart Is Like A Tender Rose |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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~*Link and minimize to hear music with poem please*~ Play Sringrain song  ~* Her Heart Is Like A Tender Rose *~Her heart I liken to a tender rose protected in a casing of sorrow. She waits to have its petals unfolded not knowing where truth and safety hides. Perhaps it listens to the sweet songs of birds, Tastes the drizzle of the rain and mist, hoping for some one to trust and hold it? She knows life’s seasons all too well, and retracts at the rays of the sun for it has scorched her petals too often. She waits holding her heart next to her bosom in safety. It will burst forth in jubilant hues as she waits for this season to change. Feel safe, know fully your season, then bloom, open your petals exhibit your raiment, my lady. Bask in the rays of the sun, accept your tears with the rain, and know this that the life of the bloom is your heart, protect it well. It is precious, invaluable and dear. The source of its beauty was always you. In this new season, rejuvenate, rejoice And with new found trust, blossom. This fragile heart, with petals fresh can open knowing it is surrounded in love. ~* For You My Friend - A Rose Of Hope and Peace *~  Graphic ~ Linda Bergkvist "Heart" small rose ~ Sultry Rose Graphics music ~ Bruce de Boer "Spring Rain" [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-18-2002 06:06 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Sharon This was simply exquisite....beautiful! Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet Sharon, God Bless You! Yes, may the rose of her heart blossom and unfold from the casing of sorrow and may the petals of her heart shine with true joy and loves purity! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo compassionately beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 BRAVO!!! Sharon, this is so fantastic! You have such wonderful messages, always from the heart, and the music and graphics are always a bonus treat. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautifully written Sharon..and lovely music too..loved it  ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Velvet made of words and petals. Lovely |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sharon~ Beautiful....a good friend indeed....  Lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"A rose of hope and peace" She is indeed, as are you, my mysteria friend - This is wonderful - Better than any old sonnet could be..  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Stunningly beautiful Sharon! Enjoyed this so much tonight! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
To have you as a friend, one must be lucky This is beautiful Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Mysteria, it is always a pleasure reading your work. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've touched me on this one...and without the music. Now, tomorrow morning, I shall read it again with the music, just to see how one enhances the others... Oh, it was a good day for Passions when you came along... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Both the poem and midi are beautiful! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just when I was thinking I could not write anything worthwhile to post here, I see your "smiling faces" here on this thread and it indeed fills me with the warmth that seems to glow within the walls that Ron created, called Passions. Thank you so much for your comments, as this is to a friend I care deeply about and empathize with all the pain she is being put through so unnecessarily. There is hope for her, and where there is hope, there is always light, and ultimately love! This my way of showing her I am but one that holds her in my keeping. Thank you all again. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (01-18-2002 08:31 PM).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Feel safe, know fully your season, then bloom, open your petals exhibit your raiment, my lady. Bask in the rays of the sun, accept your tears with the rain, and know this that the life of the bloom is your heart, protect it well. It is precious, invaluable and dear. =========================== well this is stunning...and its gift is is touching sincerity... wonderful writing of heart Sharon..so very lovely and kind...Im sure whom ever this is meant for will warm in its light. |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
As the wonder of a rose unfurls, so does this poetic work of art. One passionate read filled with much heart...  I stand and applaud with much admiration! You most certainly have not lost your touch... Love and peace ((~.~)) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I agree with Nan, This is much better than a sonnet, uncontrived, honest, and straight from the heart, It is full of lve and friendship, and I would have known the authur if you hadn't signed it, because it is who you are, THank you for sharing this exquisite peice I enjoyed the music with it' You do have a way of creating atmosphere I can imagine dinner at your house A Martha Stewart evening od sights and sounds Keep up the good work Love you Liz |
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HEG Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 42 |
Exquisitely done -- excellent poem with a wonderful presentation!! Harry |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Janet Marie ~ Thank you - to warm her heart was my intention. Maggie - Thank your for your comment, I really needed to hear that these days. Elizabeth - You and I shall share dinner soon, and that is all my mind has been on for days, and will be until we do hold hands as friends "in the flesh" as it were! I simply can't wait (but you already know that!) Thank you dear lady. HEG - So nice to meet you, and thank you so much for reading this poem. ~* CARPE' DIEM *~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned straith from the heart, to have you as friend must be wonderful. Thank you for sharing Sharon. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Exquisite poetry and so filled with loves wisdom and eternal hope...I was so in awe as I read every incredible word! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Feel safe, know fully your season, then bloom, open your petals exhibit your raiment, my lady. Bask in the rays of the sun, accept your tears with the rain, and know this that the life of the bloom is your heart, protect it well. I had to choose the same as Janet...I guess we meet on this. Yes...know yourself..your limits and glide upon it in glorious bloom. I simply adore this Mysteria. Sincerely, Regina |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your friend is lucky to bask in your glow, and I agree with Sunshine, Passions is blessed to have your words here. Hugs and peace to you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It's so good to see you posting again, Sharon...you have been missed. This poem is so beautiful, the music and graphic such a sweet addition..and your heart flowers with such loving words for your friend. Hugs! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Stunning *sigh* it's the only way I can think of to describe this poem. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Charisma ~ I think when you are a good friend you attract good friends, I am blessed and thank you. Ellie LeJeune ~ Thank you so much - p.s. will be passing through King of Prussia on the way to visit someone in PA in April so will think of you. rWood ~ Hi Regina and yes that is the secret to living life in general isn't it? Gentle Spirit ~ What a nice thing to say, and I feel grateful I found you all! Martie ~  bet your words would "flower" more, as this is your friend too, and there is no one, absolutely no one, who has words like you do dear friend.Startime ~ Thank you - p.s. the bulbs are shooting up here, how's it going over that way? ~* CARPE' DIEM *~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Sharon ... this flowed with such tenderness and inspiration, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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amigo Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 520the earth school |
As soft as a rose petal; Sooo tender is your heart.... As warming as your words can be; Sooo charming is how you are.... Sharon - this is beautiful....thanks for sharing... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dear Kit ~ Being so busy, I thank you for stopping in to read this one. Amigo ~ I kept that comment in a special book I have, and thank you for that gifting. ~* CARPE' DIEM *~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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