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Two Vines Entwined, Love Grows
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Two Vines Entwined, Love Grows |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Two loves entwined....vines rising in the air. Simple green vines...holding love they share. Weaving upward in joy felt within veins. Lasting love, rising high, forever remains. Simple slim stalks, adorned with green leaves creating a lover’s spell in hearts as they weave. Lasting love entwined as one becomes of two as breezes flow over, leaves whisper I love you. Following the sun above, flowing into the sky Falling deeper in love, sounding a soft sigh. Leaves touching each other’s soul and heart, entwined as one, never again to pull apart. Let the vines reflect the greatest love I give Let the breeze carry my heart, for you I live. Water the roots of deepest love felt by me. and let my passion entwine you ever tenderly. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh Barry! Some fantastic imagery here my friend....excellent write! *Have to run and put the coffee on* ~Hugs Nancy~ ....wonder how many hugs that makes?  ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry This was absolutely stunning. I could almost reach out and touch the vine and see the love as it grew.....beautiful!!! Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is by far one of your best yet, I could envision the whole vision of watching these flowers swaying softly in the spring breeze and slowly their vines attach together and the petals kiss, this is sooooooo romantic! (smiles) Your lovely words always make me sigh, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - I agree, the imagery is great.. Nice write... BC |
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HEG Junior Member
since 2002-01-18
Posts 42 |
Very nicely done! Great imagery, good rhyming couplets, good message.... An extremely enjoyable read! Harry |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy...I think I need tums tonight...too much coffee all day...but thanx for the offer... Sue...thanx much...YEP...I tried to let the image make the scene so to speak... Noah, Thanx young man, glad you did not run away from us. Bill, my friend...thank you as always..Your comments are received well.. Harry...again, welcome to our little world. Lots of good poetry here...including your own.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah good...this gave me vision of lavender and blue morning glories, and entwined me right in... |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Your writing here, is absolutely magical in quality. Gorgeous imagery!  copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sunshine...not being in posession of a green thumb....a vine is a vine to me...can't relate names...but glad you could...thanx.. Lyra....lady...I do love all your little figures you put on the page...and pleased you enjoyed the poetry... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh Barry! This is my FAVORITE poem of yours!!!! The title is so fitting  may the vines stay entwined and beautiful roses bloom upon it (hugs) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
RP...thank you lots...missed your posts recently...always enjoy your thoughts.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry this may be my favorite yet..simply beautiful. I liken it to grape vines, with the sweetness gowing, until harvest, where they transform into yet another miracle. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra...thanx much...yes..I agree with your assessment... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
enjoyed this, Barry, there seems to be a "spring" in the air. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely as always Mr. Barry Magnus ha..enjoyed your vines of love. or limbs of love ha ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
The images and emotions that you convey are strong as usual. I note you accept positive criticism and so I will say, at the risk of diminishing my previous comments which are sincere, that the meter length and flow detract a bit from the otherwise excellent qualities of your poem. A more consistent meter would enhance your work and make it even better. I enjoy the many poems of yours that I have seen and certainly look forward to seeing more. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
BRAVO!!!! This is absolutely stunning. Takes the breath away. Love as it should be. ***Ivy Rose |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Barry, exquisite writing from you.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Barry, this is beautiful imagery and lovely flow. Exquisite write. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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