Open Poetry #18 |
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When You... |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
When You... When you love me I am dancing on air When you love me life is going just right When you love me you warm up the cold night When you love me I'm entranced by your stare When you hold me I feel lovely and fair When you hold me I'm caught in love's light When you hold me our souls meld and take flight When you hold me eternity we share When you are gone I wish you were still here When you are gone I dream of us kissing When you are gone I know how I love you When you return I will hold you close, dear When you return my heart won't be missing When you return let us begin anew |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Bonnie, this is very nice, very nice these words never lose their meaning... Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, and may he always return and make your heart feel so happy and loved forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh yes....what a beautiful declaration of love. Absolutely beautiful. I love it. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Thanks all! This was written for my husband. He's great, but sometimes we get so caught up in our every day lives that it feels more like we're just friends living in the same house. But, then we get back on track and "begin anew" and everything is back to being wonderful. ;o) |
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