Open Poetry #18 |
backstreet sin |
OWG Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 155California |
Back Street Club good name for the street where desire spends sin aroma on the breeze and the clatter of a dancer's steps between sets at Big Joe's then resting her legs across a leather lap she smokes a wheatstraw with imagination passes it back to the tombstone man that takes her for rides on Harley iron, some sundays he polishes her thighs with trigger fingers she rambles about his tattoos and how the first time she saw him she was afraid but now she is terrified when he looks the other way and leaves her lust empty the bouncer yells she is back up in 5 to pick up bills with her straps and put smiles between old mens legs another hour of Back Street Sin ©OWG (by request) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
To me this is a sad but honest view of the life some lead whether by choice or circumstances...How very sad it felt to me. You have portrayed it very well. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i always wanted to be a dancer in a back street alley ha.. W.A. You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
OWG, you painted such a colorful portrait of this scene in my mind. Wonderful job you did with your words. I loved this. Cheryl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yea it's a good name for a club, but that doesn't mean I'd want to frequent the place. OWG, you may not paint the prettiest pictures but the fact is you can make them come alive without the glossy polish. You be the man!! |
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