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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-01-02 07:30 PM

She can’t see,
Visions are lost from all view,
Colors gone,
Image gone,
She worries at what she’ll do.
All is still,
All is still,
Motionlessly she will try,
By just touch,
She’s lost much,
Frightened she will start to cry,
She can’t see,
Memories are fading too.

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (01-02-2002 07:31 PM).]

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

1 posted 2002-01-02 07:33 PM

Professor this is sad, I know someone who is losing her eyesite and only in her forties, I hope this is just a write and not true, It is a good write, I feel the anxiety. floria

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-02 08:26 PM

(sad sigh) Oh Aszard, this is so so sad, my heart cries out to all these people who feel this way and I pray they can cling to hope and keep all their memories and joys dear to their hearts! (big hugggssssss) So heartbreaking but well-written, sweet friend, my heart is with you! You have such abeautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

thepoeticplumber
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since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

3 posted 2002-01-02 09:28 PM

Such of moving poem of sadness. So vivid to see the distress. I pray God will help each person who is faced with such sadness, get through. God Bless Roger

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-01-02 11:46 PM

HEY!!!! Glad to see you're back...
and I'm still trying to find the flow to this form...sigh, you make it flow so well it is fluid--deceptively easy, Prof...sign of an artist! Happy New year!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2002-01-03 05:19 AM

Thank you, strbbux,
Lost of sight is shattering to the soul at times,
Especially when it’s the inner sight too

Thank you, Mistletoe Angel,
For taking the time to read and respond.

Thank you, thepoeticplumber,
I believe God helps those that help themselves,
But will always guide the lost.

Thank you, Serenity,
Movement with words becomes easy with repeating,
Similar to walking down a dark hall,
After a few thousand times, it doesn’t matter if it’s dark,
The walk is familiar.

Gloom

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

6 posted 2002-01-03 01:47 PM

Utterly sad. In literally picking this up, I thought to myself, even if blind, I imagine I could still see red...figuratively speaking, I would rather be literally blind, as opposed to being blind to life...

Interesting read. Much food for thought here.

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