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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-01-18 07:09 AM

My love for you is an ancient love.
As for eons the sun has risen,
on that one perfect Spring morning,
with the purity of Earths fragrance
that transcends all worldly thoughts,
and goes beyond the hearts mere beating,
or feeling of human needs.

As out of the ashes new birth,
this love is reborn from pain,
that it no longer remembers,
and holds you tenderly with cherish.

A love so full and so beyond,
that oceans roar pounding
with passions old upon the sands
of eternal time and neverending,
are as nothing or everlasting.

Loves stillness of a snows early morn
pervades this soul with deep warmth
of old fires quiet flames of joy.
Love that will last above the beyond
of times immortal passing.

You are my beloved, sanctioned by He
Who created all bliss.
and yet...
I shall love you more the morrow.

In all your frailty do I hold dear.
For this essence that is you,
is tender and gentle flame of love.
and so...
On this love shall fire burn bright
in the hearts of our children
and they will one day know,
this love
was an ancient love beyond
all earthly days
or mere mortal understanding.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (01-18-2002 05:39 PM).]

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

1 posted 2002-01-18 10:06 AM

Ellie this is beautiful and timeless.
All of your poetry is full of wonder and very expressive.
Lovely...

Hugs,
Deb

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-18 10:07 AM

YAY!!! (smiles) Yes, yes, the beauty of love is ancient and timeless in eons of wisdom and understanding! (kiss on cheek) May we all worship the beauty of loves ancient passions and share the wealth to one another happily! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-01-18 10:08 AM

Oh Ellie, this is so so full of love, great poem. floria

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2002-01-18 10:10 AM

Wonderful romantic write. Thank you!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2002-01-18 01:43 PM

Ellie, you have taken the oldest feeling since man
and woman begun and made it fresh.
Now, is this why you look so happy?

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

6 posted 2002-01-18 06:28 PM

Mom,

This has to be one of the most amazing poems I have read so far. I suppose I wouldn't be here if it weren't for that beautuful timeless passion and love.

Beth

[This message has been edited by Lady Lost (01-18-2002 06:29 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-01-18 07:14 PM

You are my beloved, sanctioned by He
Who created all bliss.
and yet...
I shall love you more the morrow.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ellie, I love this piece so much!
This is incredible writing!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

8 posted 2002-01-18 08:46 PM

Wonderfully loving! Thanks for sharing.

-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2002-01-18 09:01 PM

Beautifully written Ellie...wonderful use of
images and words....very romantic indeed...

Lady Lost
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since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

10 posted 2002-01-20 10:39 AM

Had to give this one CPR , Mom, This is sooo amazing. One of your best, by far.

Love ya,

B

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2002-01-22 03:58 AM

Ellie~

'As out of the ashes new birth,
this love is reborn from pain,
that it no longer remembers,
and holds you tenderly with cherish.'

I can't tell you what this beautiful piece means to me ...
but please know that it touches me with tender-remember~

Love beyond all cherish ... and then some~
Just a lovely, lovely write, my friend~
Thank you sooooooo much for sharing~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

12 posted 2002-01-22 06:16 AM

Ellie, I agree with them all-pthis is one masterfully Lovely piece, which well showcases your wonderful talents.
I am sorry that I misinterpreted the actual object of your poem- but I feel it is also highly suggestive & reflective of the Heavenly Father's Amazing & Timeless & all Pervasive Love for each of us as humanity as well.

Any way you read this poem- it is a fantastic write!
David

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2002-01-22 11:09 AM

I shall love you more the morrow

nice..very nice writing *s
M

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

14 posted 2002-01-23 12:06 PM

My goodness, this is beautiful writing! The phrasing, imagery, sentiment and flow are wonderful

Have you shown this to him yet? I'm sure he loves it

This is one of your best~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2002-01-23 10:47 PM

ellie LeJeune - love this writing. Loves Ancient Passions, I just adore this title. So much meaning and more in the poem. Suburbly done....

BC

Chelsea~
Member

since 2001-02-09

Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA

16 posted 2002-01-23 11:33 PM

ellie,

I'm glad that I was told
about your poem, it is so
very pretty!

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