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Loves Ancient Passions
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Loves Ancient Passions |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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My love for you is an ancient love. As for eons the sun has risen, on that one perfect Spring morning, with the purity of Earths fragrance that transcends all worldly thoughts, and goes beyond the hearts mere beating, or feeling of human needs. As out of the ashes new birth, this love is reborn from pain, that it no longer remembers, and holds you tenderly with cherish. A love so full and so beyond, that oceans roar pounding with passions old upon the sands of eternal time and neverending, are as nothing or everlasting. Loves stillness of a snows early morn pervades this soul with deep warmth of old fires quiet flames of joy. Love that will last above the beyond of times immortal passing. You are my beloved, sanctioned by He Who created all bliss. and yet... I shall love you more the morrow. In all your frailty do I hold dear. For this essence that is you, is tender and gentle flame of love. and so... On this love shall fire burn bright in the hearts of our children and they will one day know, this love was an ancient love beyond all earthly days or mere mortal understanding. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. [This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (01-18-2002 05:39 PM).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ellie this is beautiful and timeless. All of your poetry is full of wonder and very expressive. Lovely... Hugs, Deb |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  YAY!!! (smiles) Yes, yes, the beauty of love is ancient and timeless in eons of wisdom and understanding! (kiss on cheek) May we all worship the beauty of loves ancient passions and share the wealth to one another happily! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellie, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Ellie, this is so so full of love, great poem. floria |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful romantic write. Thank you! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Ellie, you have taken the oldest feeling since man and woman begun and made it fresh. Now, is this why you look so happy?  Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Mom, This has to be one of the most amazing poems I have read so far. I suppose I wouldn't be here if it weren't for that beautuful timeless passion and love. Beth [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (01-18-2002 06:29 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are my beloved, sanctioned by He Who created all bliss. and yet... I shall love you more the morrow. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ellie, I love this piece so much! This is incredible writing! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Wonderfully loving! Thanks for sharing. -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully written Ellie...wonderful use of images and words....very romantic indeed... |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Had to give this one CPR , Mom, This is sooo amazing. One of your best, by far. Love ya, B |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ 'As out of the ashes new birth, this love is reborn from pain, that it no longer remembers, and holds you tenderly with cherish.' I can't tell you what this beautiful piece means to me ... but please know that it touches me with tender-remember~ Love beyond all cherish ... and then some~ Just a lovely, lovely write, my friend~ Thank you sooooooo much for sharing~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ellie, I agree with them all-pthis is one masterfully Lovely piece, which well showcases your wonderful talents. I am sorry that I misinterpreted the actual object of your poem- but I feel it is also highly suggestive & reflective of the Heavenly Father's Amazing & Timeless & all Pervasive Love for each of us as humanity as well. Any way you read this poem- it is a fantastic write! David Every Day's a Blessing |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I shall love you more the morrow nice..very nice writing *s M |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
My goodness, this is beautiful writing! The phrasing, imagery, sentiment and flow are wonderful Have you shown this to him yet? I'm sure he loves it This is one of your best~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ellie LeJeune - love this writing. Loves Ancient Passions, I just adore this title. So much meaning and more in the poem. Suburbly done.... BC |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
ellie, I'm glad that I was told about your poem, it is so very pretty! |
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