Open Poetry #18 |
One Love |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One Love If we both care for each other we will keep coming closer and closer together. Unless of course one of us should stop caring for the pursuit of love then I am afraid we would slowly drift apart and I know this could become one love that would leave me heartbroken forever. JamesLee January17 2002 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Gosh, James, I sure hope you get closer together. Keep thinking positive thoughts! (but you might also want to keep your fingers crossed) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
And this could be the one love that lasts a lifetime...you never know until you try it. Good write Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James, I know just what you mean. Well expessed. Sandra |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
It does take 2 and the truth of Love is that to be fully invested you have to give unreservedly and if the other should cease the pain will increase. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Sooooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I pray with all my heart that you and her get closer together and forever find true happiness and live a life with love by your side joyfully! (sigh) I think we can all relate to these feelings; I'm in love with the most beautiful girl of my dreams and all I have to do is find a way to her! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Oh Jeepers James I need a tissue. I know how you feel and the pain does really hurt. I love the way you express your feelings in words. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It takes two, baby, it takes two, baby, just you and me... reminded me of that old song. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
James - This is the chance we take. I enjoyed this write. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
James this is so beautiful, I am so hoping it all ends happy for you. floria |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* Hold on to the love...keep the romance alive...gaze with desire upon each other and love for a lifetime of joy...***big hugs*** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
James, the sad part is we have no control of the other person's feelings. Mostly hard work and continual communication keeps relationships in the "Forever" catagory. I liked your expression of love. Cheryl |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
James, I love this one. So well expressed. I do hope it all works out for you! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - what a loving gentle write! I love it, and glad that I didn't miss it... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Feelings that can be related to well...You write from your heart...and I understand your words well... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Sounds like a very special love James. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
You've found love, but I hope this love doesn't leave you behind. Hope you'll have it and keep it, for always. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it one of your best |
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