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Susie Q
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Susie Q |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Susie Q By: Noah Eaton 1/2/02 She stares out the rose window of her domain A concierge serving both destiny and fate She longs just to walk on the seashore To dance out on the balcony and feel adored She's just another daguerreotype planted on the cold wall Alone in her thoughts, longing to take the free fall She says she's just a merganser in swan lake Look up to the sun, child, for your dreams have not been delayed Susie Q You will have it all Susie Q You will be the queen at the ball She says she can feel her regrets encroach She's just a passible spirit yearning to raise a toast Constantly falling to her knees, praying to Jesus For love to come her way, while she's reluctant and anxious She talks to angels as she stares at her face in the mirror Spending her time strumming away at her desires dulcimer Fear not, dear one, He will never forget anyone You will be your prince's prom queen, you will be rich in love Susie Q You will have it all Susie Q You will be the queen at the ball Slip on your ruby slippers Open your pretty crystal eyes Slip those stockings on Show them how special you are, make a sweet suprise Adorn yourself in your silk dress Braid your hair in flowers Smack on some lipstick You have the love, let it shower Susie Q Look at you Susie Q You look so cute Susie Q Follow your dreams and you will go far Susie Q You are a star May you forever play in delight your hearts lute Show your smile to the world, have a happy lifetime honeymoon... [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (01-02-2002 07:09 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah darling boy I really love this poem it is UTTERLY utterly fabulous. Yes I know I always say that but then you always write to utter perfection. And this is utterly gorgeous, the imagery in this is truly outstanding   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Oh Noah this is simply wonderful I love susie Q , a great write, floria |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I like this darling. You are so very talented, keep these great poems coming. We all love you so much. RP |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Fantastic..my favorite..i love it Noah.. *braid her hair with flowers..beautiful hugs ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Noah. when I was growing up, I was called Susie Q. Thank you so much for this. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah I should tell you that a lot of my friends call me Susie Q, so I just had to read this one and I'm so glad I did. It was absolutely breathtaking and reminded me of Cinderella. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah, Noah, Noah, first it was Joanna, now it's Susie Q. H'mmmm, you romantic you... BC |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Nicely done Noah! It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!Well done, Noah. I love it.....*big hugs** you are just such a romantic.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, BRAVO! What a cornucopia of images. You have outdone yourself Noah! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,this was wonderful!  Juanita |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Oh NOah this is one beautiful piece of writing, the flow was awesome, it couldn't be better! Great job buddy! From your good friend Randiy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This could be a song, I love it. |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
Noah, you have such a way with words! This poem is excellent. Good work, good work. Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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