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What I Really Want----Valentine Challenge
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What I Really Want----Valentine Challenge |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I dont want roses, chocolate, or gold. All I want is to honestly be told, That you love me... Just that... That you love me. I dont want candlelight, dinner, and wine. I just want to know that you want to be mine, And that you love me... Yes that... You love me. All it would take is words written here, To let me know that you hold me dear, And that you love me... Just that... You love me. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I hope that he reads this and gives you what you want. It's amazing how many people forget the simplest gift, the words "I love you" that need to be said and heard. Good luck, Paula. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I would want the same thing Paula. But I have convinced myself not to think about him anymore, can't you tell? Sandra |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This would make a fantastic song, Paula! I can hear it now  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fantastic writing Paula...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula darling sister of my heart how can he not love you, it’s implausible that he doesn’t. You are loved and no one deserves it more darling sister. Beloved and blessed and about time too. Yes darling lil sister I love you too, I’ll say anything to get my hands on those  silver shoes. You know you want me to have them.Wonderful writing absolutely wonderful as smooth as cream darling girl, YOU are a fine writer   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) This is soooooooo bautiful, sweet friend, know that you are loved by many always and your love always lights these pages so gorgeously! (sigh) I hope he lets you reveal all your love to him and he will give you eternal happiness you'll cherish forever, you deserve the most beautiful happiest love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paula, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Beautifully said...now if only the object of my affection can read that -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
*sigh* i'm glad you're still here...but this stuff always makes me ... *sigh* honesty would be nice. lovely words. well composed! *simplify* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Alright if I must...I love you, the poem's pretty nifty too Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
you guys are awesome!!!Midnitesun...I hope he reads it too...thanks Sandra...he will be there for you...in time. Michael...then sing it to me...sing just for me. JamesMichael...hey there my sweet friend...Ive missed you...thanks Marsha...awwwww you...I can always count on you for a sweet reply. Noah...your replies are the very reason Ive come back to Passions my sweet friend...thanks rebekah33...feel free to send it to him...poems make great cards Ethan...Im glad you missed me...and I always love your replies...you make me feel special...thank you Keth!!!!!! LOL I love you too...and thanks |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I hope you'll get what you want this Valentine's Day. What more do you need when you know your mate loves you with all his heart?  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* you ask for very little and deserve it so much...I hope that you get this desire of your heart. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahhh, Paula, very gentle smile, you have not lost your touch, and it is great seeing you... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
How true Paula, all the presents cannot replace those three words, sung with tenderness and feeling. And I’m lmao at Sandra up there. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey this would make a very good song!! Good stuff Paula! What has happened to your email address. I tried to contact you the other day and the message came back as undeliverable?!?!? |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
That's really what it's all about ... love is what matters most We can't hear it or say it too often Nice writing Paula |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
aww beautiful paula! I took you up on the challenge too, check mine out |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
A simple request, yet so many have a problem speaking those three little words. I can so relate to what you've written. I enjoyed your poem so much. Thank you.. "At this point in my life I'd like |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Beautiful writing Paula, may your dreams come true |
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