Open Poetry #18 |
My Favorite Song |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
My Favorite Song sing me a lullaby rock me sweet I feel the rhythm in your heart beat safely protected in arms of calm a song of harmony my favorite song cradle of warmth to forever keep cushioned in pleasure ease me to sleep "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (01-18-2002 09:52 AM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What more could anyone ask for in a poem of such comfort and peace. This certainly had all that and more. Nicely done, Helen. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - one of the best I've seen of your writings. It is very beautiful, soft and tender.... BC |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Well done and well said!!! This is so sweet and beautiful! Excellent poetry!!!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your loving heart always shine sin your beautiful words! (kiss on cheek) May you forever sing loves sweet song with love close to your heart! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Helen, it's good to read your poetry again. This is delicately beautiful, it's a keeper Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
There is nothing like it..... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This could certainly be....your favorite song.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Poetess, this one is so soft and just what I needed on my way to hopefully sweet slumber. Thankyou. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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