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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-01-17 09:12 PM

Whisper to me...I am yours.
Softest words flowing through.
Speak of me...I treasure this.
I, your love...lie at your feet.

Though the embers are now low
memory's flame burns yet hot.
Though the silence falls upon..
I still hear lips whisper to me.

Dance a lover's song, fuel desire.
Give me your essence, mine awaits.
Warm soft sheets, turn them down.
Our dance awaits, midnight is near.

A chariot shall carry our love.
Spinning wheels weaving love's spell.
Golden horse spurred onward till
the sound of love's song arrives.

Take me now..carry me into dreams
Within them our passions are fed.
Hold me as you say that you will.
I lie...eyes closed..devouring you.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-17 09:28 PM

(sigh) Ooohhhhhh...a golden chariot ride of romance, this is soooooo pretty, sweet friend! (smiles) May you and the Cinderella of your dreams forever find true happiness in each other and may true love last eternally! (big hugggsssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2002-01-17 09:40 PM

I lie...eyes closed..devouring you.
Oh yes. Sigh. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-01-17 09:43 PM

Magnus darling boy this is truly fabulous, I know you are a master of your art but this is outstandingly good. Normally your writing is wonderful this is even better than normal.

Absolutely Fantastic

I ought to in truth be wishing you all kinds of bad things because I’m Green with jealousy. However how can I be jealous of this it is utterly wonderful, as are you
Fabulous writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2002-01-17 09:55 PM

This is very sensitive writing. Barry, you only have 2 hours before midnight!

This is a beautiful poem.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

5 posted 2002-01-17 09:57 PM

Magnus, you know, they just keep getting better and better. floria

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-01-17 10:02 PM

.........YES!!!.......

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

7 posted 2002-01-17 10:11 PM

Ah, what a wonderful romance you do write Magnus...the whispering...the dreaming...ahh...*sigh*

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

8 posted 2002-01-17 10:23 PM

Oh, sweet emotion beautifully worded! Things like this melt me like butter! This was simply lovely!!!!!

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

9 posted 2002-01-17 11:37 PM

You have melted my heart along with others I'm sure.You have done exceelent and I love to read your writes.
Peaches

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

10 posted 2002-01-17 11:45 PM

"carry me into dreams"

and with this phrase
I shall beg leave of thee
to carry into dreams,
such loving thoughts.

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2002-01-17 11:48 PM

Most beautiful thoughts! ~ you write romance well

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

12 posted 2002-01-18 12:12 PM

Magnus...Passion just flows from every word of this incredible love poem. Its wonderful to know this kind of love...if only once in a lifetime. ***Ivy Rose

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2002-01-18 11:53 AM

A chariot shall carry our love.
Spinning wheels weaving love's spell.
Golden horse spurred onward till
the sound of love's song arrives.""

This is ever so lovely in image and emotion....

Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (01-18-2002 11:53 AM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

14 posted 2002-01-18 11:56 AM

WOW!!!Now this is a pretty hot poem to read in the morning...*sigh* passionately romantic...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

15 posted 2002-01-18 12:52 PM

Mr. "M": This is a wonderful write with every word expressing love - real tender love. I am whispering - can you hear me???
Darn - well anyway, nicely done.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

16 posted 2002-01-18 06:33 PM

So much love, greatly expressed.

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

17 posted 2002-01-18 11:04 PM

This is beautiful...

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