I don't think I can take this cold.

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Open Poetry #18

I don't think I can take this cold.

woodtic
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since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

0 posted 2002-01-17 07:03 PM

It's two below.
The snow keeps piling up.
Beneath the window
that gives light into your room.

I wish I was
that light against the snow.
That warms the night.
While you lay sleeping in my gloom.

I don't think I can take this cold.
The ice that builds a heavy load,
upon my heart.

Gutters moan their last regrets.
That spring is far and summer
memories have all past.

I keep standing here and wonder.
If and what I could have done,
to make what we had last.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-17 07:21 PM

(big huggsssssss) Such sadness fills your words, sweet friend, may the sun soon come out for you and melt away all the snow and ice of your thoughts and have springs flowers and sunshine bloom in your heart and forever fill you with present happiness! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, all our prayers are with you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

2 posted 2002-01-17 07:23 PM

sad woodtic, I like how you did this with the snow and winter and feelings. floria

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2002-01-17 09:33 PM

woodtic - at times there's nothing one can do to make it last... Peace be with you...

BC

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2002-01-17 10:01 PM

Yes, nothing worse than ice upon the heart. I like your imagery and metaphor here. Very nicely done. Hope the heart thaws soon...spring is coming.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-01-17 10:05 PM

I keep standing here and wonder.
If and what I could have done,
to make what we had last.
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woodtic~Very very nicely done!
Come sit by the fire with me.

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

woodtic
Member

since 2002-01-06

Posts 87

6 posted 2002-01-18 09:57 AM

Thank you one and all for your kind words. I
have never been published nor read in public and this forum is the first place I tried. SO thank you all again for reading and making me feel welcome.

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