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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2002-01-17 10:40 AM

She walked into the room that night
and looked around hesitantly
there over by the fireplace
destiny waited patiently.

He rose and took her proffered hand
long had it been since they last met
shadows of life in focus now
returned to her-from heaven sent.

Twas not too late, she heard him say
for she had vistas yet unseen
He came to reassure her thus
to never let go of her dreams.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-01-17 10:42 AM

CatalinaMoon~
Ohhhhhhh ... I like this !!!!
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2002-01-17 10:52 AM

"vistas yet unseen"

I like that, Sandra!

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-01-17 11:00 AM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love the message in this! Sometimes our destinies take detours, but as long as we follow our dreams, we will always find a way around and find true happiness! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Canuckster
Member

since 2002-01-09

Posts 285
New Mexico, USA

4 posted 2002-01-17 11:04 AM

nice iambic quatrameter. The meters cadence combined with the movement in the poem work well in tandem. Very sound and well written poem.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

5 posted 2002-01-17 11:04 AM

And these words have such truth to them.WE should never let go of our dreams for the we shall have nothing.Excellent write.
peaches

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2002-01-17 11:10 AM

There are these moments when Destiny has to let itself be known.
You have a nice way of introducing him.
Great work!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2002-01-17 12:07 PM

catalinamoon - lovely, never let go of those dreams, for they will come true...

BC

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-01-17 12:38 PM

Wow, Sandra, this one is so cool!
"for she had vistas yet unseen"

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

9 posted 2002-01-20 03:55 PM

Ahh, Sandra. I leave for a few days, and almost missed this beauty..Very well done...very gentle smile

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2002-01-20 04:00 PM

I am so glad I didn't miss this.
Dreams are endless if we allow them to be.

Oh Sandra, I loved reading your words.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2002-01-20 04:03 PM

Sandra, I could almost see you there..
Such a nice feeling of this dream...may it
come true..

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

12 posted 2002-01-20 04:37 PM

Ooooooooooh Sandra!!!!!!!!!!!
To think I almost missed this keeper somehow!
WOW!!! Excellent write m' friend!
Talk about 'somewhere in time'!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

13 posted 2002-01-20 04:47 PM

Oh yes Catalina. never let go of your dreams, floria

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

14 posted 2002-01-20 05:22 PM

If only it could be this easy. I want my destiny to take a detour like this!!! I love the thoughts here, and the way you’ve written them Sandra.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2002-01-20 05:35 PM

Makes one have hope ...*vistas yet unseen*
Lovely Sandra..Hugss

~Victoria~

You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses.

-Ziggy

Mac Attack
Member

since 2001-12-12

Posts 100
Ontario, Canada

16 posted 2002-01-20 05:56 PM

What a way to fire a person's imagination! Excellent.

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