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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-01-17 07:46 AM

The wind wanted
me
to whispher
secrets never told
I refused
keeping my word to
never tell a soul
The wind
tried to seduce me
the night
the wine
my poet's heart
But I kept
my promise
and walked away
with all the bags

[This message has been edited by walker (01-17-2002 01:19 PM).]

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

1 posted 2002-01-17 08:03 AM

~I myself have found listening to and talking with the wind to be an interesting experience. - I like this write, heavy, to the point and leaving me thinking. Well done. *Peace.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-17 08:30 AM

(smiles) Soooooooo cleverly expressed, sweet friend, it too is nice to hear the wind, but it's how you feel in the heart that motivates us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2002-01-17 09:34 AM

walker - I like this....but tell me....what was in the bags?

Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

His Poet
Senior Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

4 posted 2002-01-17 10:08 AM

Walker, very nicely done poem. I loved the idea of conversing with the wind. Maybe that's God whispering in our ears. Cheryl

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

5 posted 2002-01-17 11:05 AM

The wind
tried to seduce me
the night
the wine
my poet's heart
But I kept
my promise

Sometimes, the promise is the part that most knows the love it protects. Good one, walker!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2002-01-17 06:19 PM

oh yes, oh yes, Walker you graciously
pack a whallop, ya know that?

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-01-17 06:23 PM

Walker so glad for you that you walked away.. nice poem . floria

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