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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2002-01-17 07:30 AM

Close to love

The breeze of intuition warmly blows
Against your face with magic of the night
Awakening the senses now exposed
Just as a flower opens to the light

Intuitively nature takes its hold
Unwrapping sentiments so long suppressed
Unveiling thoughts you’d saved in petal’s fold
And beauty of the love you have possessed

The fragrance of your essence is his breath
And now aware the beauty of the bloom
Impulsively his eyes from in their depth
Search for the rose they’re longing to consume

The balm of your bouquet, adornment of
A heart aware it lingers close to love

Elizabeth Santos

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-01-17 08:14 AM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) You always write the most brethtakingly beautiful sonnets and imagery, sweet friend, your heart opens up in joy like the rose of your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, love blossoms in your lovely words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

True Reflections
Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 143
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2002-01-17 09:52 AM

Liz,
I'm grabbing a flashlight and going looking for love in all the right places.
You make me swoon and want to howl at the moon.
My tongue is wagging.
Darnth, ith sthuck in my thirt thipper and nowth I canth lifth my headth.
O thwell.
Wontherful poemm asth uthual. Thorry.

Rother.

OWG
Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 155
California

3 posted 2002-01-17 10:03 AM

smooooth tunes liz' n-joyed the texture

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2002-01-17 10:37 AM

LizzieLady~

'The balm of your bouquet, adornment of
A heart aware it lingers close to love'

Beautiful closing couplet~
*Sigh*
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

5 posted 2002-01-17 11:32 AM

WOW>I love the imagery here.The way you've combined love and nature is winderful.
peaches

Lady Ollyne
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 337
East Coast

6 posted 2002-01-17 05:04 PM

"A heart aware
it lingers close to love"
lovely are you words, as always,
penned above.

Lady Ollyne

"O, learn to read what silent love hath writ:
To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

7 posted 2002-01-17 06:16 PM

Elizabeth, it is there again, the timing, the rythm..I love it.. I have a feeling that you don't work hard at this, that it just comes naturally. floria

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-01-17 08:36 PM

Elizabeth, so sorry to be late in saying how much this pleases me...being without a computer is like losing a lifeline...

warm hugs...just like this warmed me...

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2002-01-18 02:25 AM

Elizabeth this was breathtakingly beautiful (can I borrow it for the workshop - dah dum, lol)

Just loved how you worked nature into this one.

~* CARPE' DIEM *~

Ethan Halo
Senior Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 793
on the roof again

10 posted 2002-01-18 04:24 AM

my my my. you have a way with metaphors and imagery!

Impulsively his eyes from in their depth
Search for the rose they’re longing to consume

those lines are amazin'.

*simplify*

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