Synchronicity… a doit/duet by Duncan and Tracey

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Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding

0 posted 2002-01-17 01:12 AM

Synchronicity… a doit/duet by Duncan and Tracey

Listen...do you hear it
Your heart in time with mine
Oh yes my dear I hear it
In a lovers perfect rhyme

Hold me...can you feel it
This need to melt with you
Yes my dear i feel it
We are one, no longer two

I hear your heart call to me, as mine calls out to you
Sing to me your lyrics, and I will be your tune
Play me like a violin, caress me like the breeze
Loving you comes to me, with such perfect ease

I feel your hand reach for mine, as we walk without a word
With a sigh of pure contentment, of this night I am assured
To love you as a story, told once with all my heart
Replayed through time eternal, that we may never part

Now
I write you love songs
When I thought they’d all been sung
Here
I see unfailing love
New beneath the sun

I will hear your love songs, upon my heart they’ll play
I will be there in your arms, each and every day
Our love forever holding, there upon the shore
Know that I’ll be with you, now and evermore

[This message has been edited by Tracey (01-17-2002 01:31 AM).]

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2002-01-17 01:28 AM

BRAVO! 'Tis about time for a twosome tune from the likes of you two. (as opposed to U2, for which Bono already has the rights)

My song for you:

With words entertwined,
hearts are singing in rhyme.
LOVE.
Sublime.

ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT

2 posted 2002-01-17 01:43 AM

A commanding performance ...
How do you "do it" !!

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2002-01-17 04:10 AM

This is lovely and sooooo romantic... Great work you two, you make a great team.

Maree

Kethry
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Victoria Australia

4 posted 2002-01-17 06:00 AM

Lovely interweave you have going here.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

walker
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5 posted 2002-01-17 07:38 AM

So romantic, I love it.

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2002-01-17 07:40 AM

                     Hold me...can you feel it
                    This need to melt with you
                    Yes my dear i feel it
                   We are one, no longer two

                    I hear your heart call to me, as mine calls out to you
                    Sing to me your lyrics, and I will be your tune
                    Play me like a violin, caress me like the breeze
                    Loving you comes to me, with such perfect ease

                    I feel your hand reach for mine, as we walk without a word
                    With a sigh of pure contentment, of this night I am assured
                    To love you as a story,  told once with all my heart
                    Replayed through time eternal, that we may never part

                    Now
                    I write you love songs
                    When I thought they’d all been sung
                    Here
                    I see unfailing love
                    New beneath the sun
=======================================

I do so enjoy seeing poets minds entwine for these duets...most times they bring out the best in one another...very cool poem you two...a lovely tune of promise wrapped in rhyme ... encore ... encore

jm

Even thru the darkest phase, be it thick or thin
Always someone marches brave, here beneath my skin
Constant Craving ... has always been.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-01-17 08:07 AM

YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I LOVE IT!!! You two make such a beautiful duet together, sweet friends, you are both soooooooo romantic! (smiles) May these love songs forever strum your hearts and fill you both with the joys of true love! (BIG GROUP HUG) We all love you so much, sweet friends! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tracey and Duncan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

SpitFire
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8 posted 2002-01-17 08:20 AM

~Tracey, Duncan,...this is just lovely. Ahh. So peaceful and warm. Job well done you two. Enjoyed your duet. *Peace.

True Reflections
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9 posted 2002-01-17 09:56 AM

Duncan and Tracey,
This puts Peaches and Herb to shame. Very lovely duet.
My heart hasn't been touched like this since the kid played dueling banjos in "Deliverance". Honestly, I thought the poem was very good and I enjoyed it.

Roger

[This message has been edited by True Reflections (01-17-2002 09:58 AM).]

OWG
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10 posted 2002-01-17 10:04 AM

nice fit
of people and words
comfortable combination

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

11 posted 2002-01-17 11:31 AM

Beauty here, in the poem and the writers. Lady Sandra sees great love and synchronicity in your future..
Sandra

peaches73533
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12 posted 2002-01-17 12:07 PM

Beautifully written.You two make an awesome team.
Peaches

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2002-01-17 12:14 PM

Tracey - wow, you two write together in perfect harmony. This is just excellent...

BC

Auguste

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By the sea

14 posted 2002-01-17 12:45 PM

Very nice work you two. Clapping!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Duncan
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15 posted 2002-01-17 02:18 PM

Hey Trace...wanna doit, again? And again. And again. This, dear...is why I never sleep.

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding

16 posted 2002-01-18 07:11 AM

Thank you all for your replies. Duncan has left the responding to me.. he came up with all kinds of excuses, but the most truthful, was that he’s lazy!!! Lol. He told me that since I posted the poem (which, poet friends, he made me do. Pouted, whined and all the rest, til finally I relented and said I would post it. Don’t ya just hate seeing a grown man whine??)

Kacy, lol at you!! Yes, it’s been a long time coming hasn’t it? We were just saying the same thing ourselves

Craig, we “doit” with a bit of pouting, a lot of laughing, and a lot of heart

Dark Angel, glad you like the romance in this, and for thinking we make a great team

Kethry, thank you for your thoughts

Walker, thanks so much, we loved writing it

JM, your responses are always so lovely. Yes, we are planning an encore, mind you, it might take a while, we’re both procrastinators, you have no idea how long we’ve talked about doing this

Noah, big hug to you, and yes..may these love songs forever strum our hearts

SpitFire, thank you so much, so glad you liked it

True Reflections, high praise indeed, for they were a great songwriting team (are we showing our ages here?? Lol). I am movie challenged, so didn’t see the scene in Deliverance that you mentioned though.

OWG, thank you so much, we found it to be a nice fit to write it together

Lady Sandra, we like your fortune telling!!

Peaches, thank you so much.

Bill, so glad you think we write in harmony. We hoped it came across that way

Michael, thanks for reading and clapping.

Hey Dunc, I’ll doit with you again, and again anytime!!!

Oh sure…blaming ME for keeping YOU up again!!! Lol

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (01-18-2002 07:13 AM).]

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

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17 posted 2002-01-19 01:52 AM

Tracey & Duncan,
S-A-L-U-T-E!!! No wonder our last poem isn't done. LOL

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

18 posted 2002-01-19 02:00 AM

Oh yes!!!!!

There is always a love song to be sung,
we just have to learn the words.

And you guys have them down!!

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