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Silver Streak
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0 posted 2002-01-16 10:41 PM


Write

"My heart is stirred by a noble theme as I recite my verses for the king;
my tongue is the pen of a skillful writer." NIV Psalms 45:1

You say you'll never write again?

Never write again?
Because of your pain?
How can you gain?
When poison's in a soul.

Must it not be cleansed
By your own true pen
And so my friend
To make your heart grow whole?

Write and write! And write!
'Til your soul's pure white
Leave cold dark night
Come! Bring your pen! Let's fight!

Write!

Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher
Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida
January 16, 2002

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2002-01-16 10:56 PM


You could not know, had no way of knowing how much this meant to me to read this from another.  These words.  I read them and I just nearly fell apart.  Thank you so much for this, for I have nearly given up so many many times.  Oh, not writing, really, for I don't believe I could ever give that up but sharing, expressing openly, publicy, it's painful, it hurts!  But it heals also.
It heals a person who has been broken and suffering and allows the good and the
joy to return to the heart that was so desperately wounded.

God bless you for this.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2002-01-16 10:58 PM


oh, and thank you also for that particular verse, I have never read that.  I will now...often.

Kathleen--(Kay)
A true friend does not love you for who you are, but in spite of who you are." -- Caroline Tran

Sunset
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3 posted 2002-01-16 11:04 PM


You touch upon a truth.  We write because we must.  Very nice, Silver Streak.  
Morcastlin
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4 posted 2002-01-16 11:09 PM


Truer words were never spoken. This is a wise and insightful read! I wholeheartedly agree! Write!!!!
Silver Streak
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5 posted 2002-01-16 11:09 PM


Thank you, Kay for your wonderful response. I am glad that you found it inspiring and thrilled you liked the scripture verse. As you well know, healing can only take place when we face an injury and in our mind remove it like surgery. The bad must be released! One little decayed bit at a time. And as the rot goes, healing replaces it with beautiful, pure new life.
-newell  

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poetryinmotion
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6 posted 2002-01-16 11:10 PM


wonderful bro. just wonderful. i will never give up writing even though sometimes i think i must. but then i come back down to earth and start writing again.   love ya. sis
Silver Streak
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7 posted 2002-01-16 11:10 PM


Thank you Sunset for your very kind words.
-newell

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Silver Streak
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8 posted 2002-01-16 11:12 PM


Thank you, Morcastlin, for you very kind words.
-newell

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Silver Streak
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9 posted 2002-01-16 11:15 PM


Beautiful Alice. Thank you for your wonderful words. Yes, we've been through this together. And I know you how fight like a general! And you write like an angel. Love you, sis.
-bro

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Irish Rose
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10 posted 2002-02-06 03:02 AM


again, I had to read this again, and I will write, not right now, but I will, oh I will, and I'll write and write until there is nothing left to write and then I'll write some more!!!!!!
thank you for this poem and thank you for your kindness.

Kathleen--(Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee



Silver Streak
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11 posted 2002-02-06 07:42 AM


You are welcome, Kay.
((Kay))
-newell

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12 posted 2002-02-06 12:32 PM




YAY!!! May we all write on for the good of our hearts and spirits and release all our tears within ourselves and have them sparkle with hope and insporation and possibility! (big hugggsssss) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always such a delight to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Newell, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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13 posted 2002-02-06 12:51 PM


You know what Newell, I don't think we have a choice here, Once I was very down and I said, I am not writing anymore..As I don't write with pen but on the PC, My body somehow gravitated towards the PC and my fingers went into action. It can be scary. But I do believe the poet, writer in us, drives us to write...love this much.. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Silver Streak
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14 posted 2002-02-06 02:36 PM


Thank you sweet Noah for your loving thoughts.
((Noah))

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Silver Streak
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15 posted 2002-02-06 02:40 PM


Thank you floria for your thoughts. Yes! I know that I have no choice. I write about everything. And if someone says anything is evil, I quickly write the darkest side as I try to understand the truth in it. All poison must be released! Vomited! Excreted! For purity demands cleansing. And that is what poetry is all about. Purifying our soul. Write! Write! Write! then Love! Love! Love!
((floria))
-newell  

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Silver Streak
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16 posted 2002-02-06 02:53 PM


Thank you, Alice. Nice to see you back. How are your songs and books doing. Any shows, lately? Love you, sis,
((Alice))
-newell

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