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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2001-12-31 11:32 PM

The shadow of jupiter appears to my eyes,
Then when I look closer,
I realize it is Luna who is sitting on the sky.
With white ribbon clouds around her waist,
She moves slightly with her hands
As Jupiter tinges the ribbon with hue
Which resemble the robe of her clothes.

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-31 11:41 PM

*sigh* a beautiful vision that seemed to dance before my eyes. Well done. HAPPY NEW YEAR

**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-01-01 12:57 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is such a beautfiul celestial vision, sweet friend, you sprinkle stardust in the atmosphere with your wings you spread through your heart! (kiss on cheek) I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2002-01-01 06:02 AM

aries_luv_ppl-
   This is beautiful...wonderful imagery in this.
   Very nicely penned.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2002-01-01 09:57 PM

I remembered reading this and thought I replied, I loved this, the moon
holds a special place in my heart with someone I love very, very much.

Thank you for this one.

'Fiction is the truth inside the lie.' ~Stephen King

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-01-01 10:06 PM

aries...This poem reminds me of mythical Greek Gods and Goddesses. It has an elusive, and haunting quality to it. Most enjoyable. ***Ivy Rose

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2002-01-01 10:12 PM

aries_luv_ppl - very moving words and visions...

BC

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

7 posted 2002-01-02 03:08 PM

Thanks. And I'm so glad you all like it.

My friend told me what happened with the moon one night then I wrote this poem.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

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