Open Poetry #18 |
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Lost Between Cultures |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada ![]() |
Penned for a child that I have been gifted the honor of knowing and for whom I pray daily. Lost Between Cultures I see this beautiful native child So sad of for her young years A trustless soul and a heart defiled Strong, defiant to hide her fears God how could one so dear be lost I see her slipping farther each day Mother’s drinking bears high cost Her daughter forgotten by the way To her grandma she is sent to live Hospice, a check for a home How can one so young forgive Loss of love, sense of being alone Into her own world she retreats With silent tear and hardened soul Kicked around by politics’ feet Without care for her console Passed birthdays without gift Slept nights without a meal What can give this soul a lift Imagine how she must feel No-one seems to care at all If she laughs or if she cries Or pick her up after a fall Wipe the tears from her eyes Her own culture turns its back Ours say it’s not their call I know I paint this picture black But there is no color here at all I’m talking of this child’s soul Her lack of emotional nurture This will carry an exacting toll On her outlook and her future From this day I solemnly vow To gift her a smile each day And I’ll find a way somehow To keep her darkest fears at bay Brian Beaudry [This message has been edited by brianbeaudry (01-16-2002 09:04 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, your loving heart always shines in your beautiful words with love and compassion! (sigh) My heart cries out to this poor little girl, and I can't believe how her parents could treat her that way, but I just know if anyone can help her feel better again, it's you! (big hugggsssss) If only there were more loving people like you out there, sweet friend, we are all so happy and blessed to know you! My prayers join yours for this sweet little girl! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Brian So very powerful were your words as they painted such a very sad but real picture of our society. Unfortunately the majority of people seem too caught up in their own worlds to care about others. How very fortunate this beautiful child has your gift of love which I'm sure would make her smile. Your words made me very emotional Brian and I hope there is light at the end of the tunnel for this child. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
So very sad and heartfelt!Well done. |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
The poor little darling...i will pray too for her..and hope an angel is watching over her... ![]() ~Victoria~ You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian--I was a teacher for many years and saw so many situations that made me cry...You show great empathy and a kind heart in this poem..perhaps your smile and her adversity will make her strong...I hope so! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I love how you added to this poem about how you will give her a smile each day and help ease her pain somehow. This is so heartbreakingly sad but so real in todays world...The pour children are the ones who suffer the most and then we complain when they grow into adults who seem to not care about anyone or anything. BRAVO!!!You are truly a man of great heart, my friend, and I applaud your efforts to help. **big big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (01-16-2002 09:52 PM).] |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Brian, if you would, I would like to know the child's name so that I may add her to my prayers. You can answer here or email me at [email protected] Your poem touched me greatly and I would like to do what I can to help. This is so very sad. Poor child, I hate to hear of such heartbreaking things. God bless you, you have written this beautifully. Love, Bonnie |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
angels take many forms my friend. . . ![]() this is one of them. . . well done, and totally heartfelt. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brian, this is a heartbreaking write and this child is so fortunate to know you, and I also will include her in my prayers. Bless you for your kind-heartedness. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sometimes children are treated as weeds or wild flowers, stepped on as if they were of no consequence. And because of deeply ingrained color/race/socio-economic prejudices, many are abused, ignored, left to fend for themselves, or pushed from shelter to foster care or onto the streets. Until every child on earth is given equal access to food, shelter, education, and a caring family, there will be no Peace on Earth. That's how I see this issue. Thank you, Brian, for being worthy of the name of human. |
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poeticdreamer Junior Member
since 2002-01-17
Posts 46 |
Wonderful, such sweetly expressed thoughts here! Simply lovely! |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Thank you all for your heartfelt comments and thank you for your prayers for Andrea, they are greatly appreciated. |
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