Open Poetry #18 |
A Union Of Souls |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
As a bride she feels like a princess All in white her face aglow She had finally found her soulmate Her love for him continued to grow She pirouettes in front of the mirror Feeling like she is walking on air Soon to be with her prince charming They'll begin new lives without a care She's waited so long for this moment Now all her dreams are coming true As she imagines him holding her closely And whispering the words 'I love you' Rose petals adorn the pathway That leads the way to her man He's so proud and so very handsome As she makes her way to where he stands Their vows have now been made They stand together side by side Both bursting at the seams From a love they cannot hide A union made in heaven Two souls have now combined They'll be together for all eternity In body soul and mind Love found its rightful place Inside these two very special hearts Love blooms like a beautiful flower A new chapter of love about to start Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are always sooooooo romantic! (smiles) May this prince and princess forever be wedded in happiness and share a life of true love forever and ever! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I cried reading this to feel the beauty of this wedding! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!!This is what love is all about. Joining together heart, body, mind and soul...Sue, this poem is perfection to me. **big big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Very beautiful poem of this union of love! |
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brianbeaudry Member
since 2001-07-20
Posts 410Northern Ontario Canada |
Beautiful Sue, and perfect timing, I'm sure my daughter felt just like this when she was wed last month!!You have an awsome talent my friend!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...this is simply awesome...and could reflect any bride's feelings and thoughts very well... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Fabulous portrayal of love and what marriage should be, Sue. Wonderful! All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
now, this is what it should be like absolutely. I love weddings. Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your wonderful words. I'm so glad you liked them. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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