Open Poetry #18 |
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I Am What I Am |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
You call me names and laugh at me. But when you`re in need I`m who you come and see. Its not my fault I`m here for one thing. But sometimes when you`re here I can here you sing. You bring your magazines and sit for awhile. When you leave you`re wearing a feel better smile. You`ll always need me there ain`t no doubt. You just have to see me to let everything out. I`ll always be here as quiet as a mouse. I`m your bathroom but was once called an outhouse. ![]() ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a unique poem indeed ha..love your cute little cartoons.. ![]() ~Vic You can complain because roses have thorns, or you can rejoice because thorns have roses. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
HAHAH I love this N Carolina thinking of a tune " thats what friends are for, thats what friends are for" I enjoyed this. floria |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I know this feeling ![]() Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Thats the power of friendship sometimes, where just your presence will heal their problems. Nicely written! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Oh my gosh, I know this feeling ever so much myself; sometimes I just don't feel like being in the company of others, and people can hurt me, but nevertheless through time they seem to find more respect and I feel comfortable being not alone. (sigh) You are what you are, sweet friend, a very loving person with a big golden heart of love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Hey Girl: "I`m your bathroom but was once called an outhouse" Love it - uniquely different. You certainly have a way of making everyone smile. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling with delight* I love it...simply a delight to read....sure put a laughing smile on my face. **big hugs** ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Juanita, It takes a real woman to write potty poetry. I'm very turned on right now. Hold me. Roger |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Neat write - love the cartoons - me, I'm still the outhouse..., how did you make it to bathroom status (my ambition--hee, hee). jwesley |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Juanita, Only you could write a toilet tribute with such class. I'm laughing as I type. This was so cute. Way to go. Cheryl |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Victoria,thanks for reading my silly poems.I`m glad you like the cartoons. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Floria,thank you I`m glad if this gave you a smile. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I like this too...there are some clever lines in this poem. (hugs) RP |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Kay,thanks for reading! ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Randy,thanks so much for reading this,I really appreciate it. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,you are just too sweet.Thank you so much! ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Ariana,thank you for the kind words.I can always use a good smile myself. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Karen,I`m so glad you liked this.I smiled the entire time I was writing it. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Roger,so thats what makes me a lady?If I was there with you I would hold you so tight.:squeeze. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
jwesley,it took a while to work up to a bathroom.I`m glad you like the cartoons,I enjoy putting them on here. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Juanita, Only you would write an ode to an outhouse. ![]() ![]() Nan |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Juanita, Hugging me would be easy to do. While pot-sitting I always put my arms straight out sideways in case I fall in. This would prevent me going in above my shoulders. One can never be too careful. It's hard to do the paperwork though. Roger |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Cute poem with a real "clincher" at the end (no "bun" intended) ..... ![]() |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Cheryl,is my southern roots showing? ![]() ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Mama This was funny.I have toilet envy now. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was an absolute classic! So very comical and so very much enjoyed by this reader. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This one has me laughing so hard that I will have to pay you a visit or I will wet my pants, Juanita......... ![]() A real beauty of a down home poem... Great job! copyright2002 Lyra Nesius |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
North Carolina Girl - now I've been saying that no one writes them like a girl from north carolina... BC |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
RosePetal,I`m glad you liked this. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Roger,honey I would never let you fall in. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Nan,my dear friend you know I`m a little strange. ![]() ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bartin,thanks for reading this I appreciate it. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Stevie,I knew I`d do a poem that you would be envious over. ![]() ![]() Mama |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sue,thank you! ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Lyra,I`m so glad this gave you a smile.I guess you can tell I`m southern born and southern bred.TAKE CARE! ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,I guess my NC blood shines through.Thanks friend! ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I love the way you toyed with this and enjoyed it very much. Peaches |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Priceless! Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Peaches,thank you so much! ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Newel,thanks for reading. ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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