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Naked Nymphs
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Naked Nymphs |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
We are just nymphs at play on the beach Ever so close, but just out of reach Writing of sand and water and moon Baring our hearts, our clothes are left strewn All over the shore, we are naked and nubile Our thoughts and our souls will mingle awhile Yet, a time will come when we shall depart But, the words have been written... this is our art. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, this is soooooo beautifully said, sweet friend, we are indeed, and we build sand castles of the beauty of imagination and snorkel in the barrier reef of our hearts, finding all the joys of love in life! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooo original, I just love how you write! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Morcastlin, You paint a pretty picture here. floria |
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True Reflections Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 143Ohio, USA |
Morcastlin, I'll never be mistaken for nubile. Very nicely done. I have to assume you're a lot younger than I am. Roger |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
where is this beach?? Kathleen--(Kay) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sometimes it all seems only for the sake of words doesn't it? I love this! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I love to play naked in the waves...*grin* this is a wickedly delicious poem...I love it, of course. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Sounds real good! I like this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like the thoughts of this...James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
How very true. Enjoyed this! All writing comes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Great imagery here.....enjoyed much! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
I'll come, only if it's very dark, cause I can pinch more than an inch, dear...this is a wonderfully fun poem...Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now I really do miss the beach! Where did I leave my pail and shovel? And just where did I leave that wetsuit? |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
This was nothing short of stunning and was so very much enjoyed. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Morcastlin~ A lovely write ... Welcome to the Passion Forums~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ahh! This is a brilliant description of God's most wonderfully crafted jewels on earth. Man simply doesn't have a chance. Nor should he. -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Ahh! This is a brilliant description of God's most wonderfully crafted jewels on earth. Man simply doesn't have a chance. Nor should he. -Silver Streak Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Morcastlin - I can just picture these innocent nymphs frolicing in the sand. Your writing is exceptional. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Thanks all for your sweet comments! I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
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